The Gift of Life!' III.
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Comment from mermaids
I like the good feeling I receive when I read your poem. I feel like I am floating to heaven. You have a vivid use of words to capture how the angels are guiding you to heaven. Nothing less than a six.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
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I like the good feeling I receive when I read your poem. I feel like I am floating to heaven. You have a vivid use of words to capture how the angels are guiding you to heaven. Nothing less than a six.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
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Thanks and my next one is...
'A Killer!'
Ricky...
Comment from Eve Bailey
I gave you four stars. I see the meaning of what you are saying. I found double words in a couple of places ( when I'm (should be I) finally can collect collect my thoughts. I don't know if it is meant to be that way. Also the second sentence down, is that suppose to be deem. I think it is a great piece of writing. I love anything dealing with the Heavens.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2017
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I gave you four stars. I see the meaning of what you are saying. I found double words in a couple of places ( when I'm (should be I) finally can collect collect my thoughts. I don't know if it is meant to be that way. Also the second sentence down, is that suppose to be deem. I think it is a great piece of writing. I love anything dealing with the Heavens.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2017
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Its actually still not edited.
Babysitting...
Thanks, Ricky1024