Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

You managed to make me hungry for icecream... job done. You created an image for us to enjoy, and planted in our heads. Children and older people! Yummy!

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Yes, Rhonda, I know what you are having for dessert tonight, or for breakfast. Thank you for your review.

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 04-Mar-2017

Indeed!

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Yes, we old souls do tend to dream of food these days. And what better memory from childhood than ice cream! Well done!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Yes, June, we old souls dream of ice cream. Thank you for your review.

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

A nice senyu. Taking the idea of ice cream in winter time dreaming is brilliant. Yes, one could dream of such at anytime. Charming illustration and excellent poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you, Nancy, for your review and for wishing me success in the contest. Yes, one can dream about ice cream anytime.

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi friend, who does not like icescream. The children dream of it and the older ones gorge on . All dream of summer .
This is quite nice write, so realistic and enjoyable.
Danny Jock

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you, Danny Jock, for your review of my delicious poem.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Nicely stated, "children's tongues and thrill old souls" Everyone loves ice cream. Your senryu is clever while still keeping the charm and flow of your words. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you, Marilyn, for your review. Yes, everyone lines ice cream.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Are you kidding me! This is wonderful, I love the simple thought of "ice cream" that this poem creates. I can taste the "Moosetracks" right now! I wish I had a six for you.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

No, Mike, I am not kidding. I try to keep my poetic thought simple. Thank you for your review of my tasty poem and for wishing me success in the contest.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! I like the fresh interpretation of the satori.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you, Rebekka, for your review of my "fine piece of poetry." Thank you also for wishing me contest success.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

What a fun poem. Love it. The art choice is perfect. I like your play on the Shakespearean ply, too. Good job with the style.

Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you, Jan, for your review of my "fun poem." Thank you also for wishing me the best in the contest.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

A fun poem about ice cream. Something I know all children, and most adults, love. *smile* This was an interesting read and I wish you luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you, Robyn, for your review of my "fun poem" about a universal love of ice cream and for wishing me success in the contest.

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Poet,

Ice cream chills the tongue and soothes the throat and as you say good for young and old and all those folks in between.

Good luck in the contest.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you, Winslow, for your review and for wishing me success in the contest.