Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. There is nothing that a mother's new baby does that can offend her. That is part of motherhood. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked this just-for-fun entry. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

Every mother reading this is carried back to the changing table!Yes, I remember feeling this very way and I think you did a wonderful thing to bring us this cute/ smelly memory.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend,

Your funny 5/7/5 has the right amount of syllables and the lines connect smoothly. It also has concrete images and your presentation is very attractive, what a cutie pie. Good job!
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's a blessing to be nose-blind sometimes! I guess moms of newborns are too occupied caring for the young blessing that all those smells don't seem to bother.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Yes - being nose-blind isn't so bad. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written fun 5-7-5 poem. A goid mother knows a pooping child is a healthy child and turn on a blind nose for the smell and clean her baby with a smile.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Glad you liked it. Being nose-blind can be a blessing when you have a few years of changing diapers ahead of you. Doing it with a smile is good for both the mom and baby. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

LOL! Yes, mothers do gain a whole new set of senses when it comes to their babies.
You've done a good job with the 5-7-5 format. Your little poem tells a story that does 'make em laugh.'
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thanks ~patty~ . Glad you got a laugh out of it. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This poem tells about some mothers who may sometime like to smell baby fine arts (dysphemism) as some mothers call them bad for having such attitude; I like this work of fun.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thanks. Glad you found this a fun piece. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from joeruptak

Excellent

three lines that bring back a lot of old memories
of our firstborn and my wife's attitude
any thing that the baby did was funny or only proved how
healthy he was
thank you for bringing back some pleasant memories
good job

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thanks. Glad this brought back some pleasant memories. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

So true, babies have virgin poops! In fact I learned to quite like the smell! Never offensive, always a relieve that it was coming out the other end okay! A fun write that made me smile and brought back memories, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thanks, Dolly. Glad this piece made you smile and brought back some memories. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

It's not just mothers, you know? Some of us dads have to develop this anomaly as well! This is a good fun piece for the competition.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thanks, GMG. Glad you found this a fun piece. Yes - dads and the entire family can be nose-blind. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)