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Just for fun 5/7/5

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Comment from winnona
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A well-written contest entry. The artwork is exceptional and completed the piece well. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well. Good luck , well done.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from LoannaLois
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What a funny twist on the subject!what an unlikely place for a really funny 5-7-5. I also loved the illustration. Did you do it?

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
    Thanks for reading - no , MK Flood Fan Art did the lovely illustration zanya
Comment from mkflood
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yeah i was given a challenge years ago to create an illustration with neutral colors only..heck me being a sharpie/bic artist thats easy. i have been working with these pens sine the late 60's and back then there was only 4 basic colors. (red,blue,green and black) now days there is many shades of gray besides other colors. well you see the results and im proud that you have selected this. it is an honor to have my work included with yours. great job and thanks again. wink..mkflood

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
    Beautiful Art work - thanks for the comments zanya
reply by mkflood on 07-Mar-2017
    i have about 800 illustrations of a wide range of topics i make available to you writers her on fanstory. you have permission to use any of them. get writers stop by and check them out to get some ideas..wink
Comment from rspoet
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The is a clever entry for the contest
with the required 5-7-5 syllables
and some good word play, good alliteration
and two rhymes, as well
Excellent art work to match
Very well done
Best wishes in the contest

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
    Loved this review zanya
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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A very clever take on this style of poetry. I love clever writers. Did you look to see if there is a contest that this would fit in?

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
    thanks for the critique zanya