I'm Glad Your Flowers Died
Five-Seven-Five3 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. It is well done and part of me wanted to laugh and the other part wanted to cry. Your artwork and background color completed the piece well.
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A well-written contest entry. It is well done and part of me wanted to laugh and the other part wanted to cry. Your artwork and background color completed the piece well.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
While it is interesting to think about someone who measures life by the time it takes a flower to die, I am perplexed. Is the writer very old OR are they suicidal?
Just my meandering, I guess. The little 5-7-5 did make me think, and you do tell a tale - a remarkable feat with so few words.
~patty~
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While it is interesting to think about someone who measures life by the time it takes a flower to die, I am perplexed. Is the writer very old OR are they suicidal?
Just my meandering, I guess. The little 5-7-5 did make me think, and you do tell a tale - a remarkable feat with so few words.
~patty~
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from moonsunrise
This poem is adorable. I love the imagery as it depicts the sunflower's attitude about how he/she feels about having the last laugh.
Very well done!~
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This poem is adorable. I love the imagery as it depicts the sunflower's attitude about how he/she feels about having the last laugh.
Very well done!~
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017