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Aiona's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Invierno"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from Bill Schott
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Que pasa, Invierno. Me llamo Bill. Mucho gusto. No habla espano. Well that about does it for my Spanish. I'm sure this was a nice poem.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    Thank you for peeking. Any suggestions for improvements?
reply by Bill Schott on 02-Mar-2017
    I would need to see the translation as I pretty much guessed at the wording.
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Excellent. This is probably a lovely poem but I can't read a word of it. I grew up listening to Spanish spoken all around me but was too lazy to learn it.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
    Thank you for peeking. Any suggestions for improvements?