Snapdragon
The names of flowers amuse me.14 total reviews
Comment from kathleenspalding
Totally awesome super cute nature haiku/fIve seven five. I love it! Congratulations on your well deserved win! I would recommend this poem to everyone.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Totally awesome super cute nature haiku/fIve seven five. I love it! Congratulations on your well deserved win! I would recommend this poem to everyone.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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I love your enthusiasm, thank you
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You're welcome
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
That was well done. Love the metaphor of the snap dragon.
It is an amusing name for the flower.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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That was well done. Love the metaphor of the snap dragon.
It is an amusing name for the flower.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for enjoying the humor.
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:)))
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written the good old snap dragon very original a good play on words using this form I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Yes this is well written the good old snap dragon very original a good play on words using this form I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your positive comments.
Comment from TheWriteTeach
I love the humor in this nature haiku. I'll never look at the snapdragon the same way again! :o) Nice job with this. Good luck in the contest.
Suzanne
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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I love the humor in this nature haiku. I'll never look at the snapdragon the same way again! :o) Nice job with this. Good luck in the contest.
Suzanne
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the enjoyment you express.
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely play on words in the excellent nature haiku. I enjoyed the satori line.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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A lovely play on words in the excellent nature haiku. I enjoyed the satori line.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for such positive words.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Clever poem about snapdragons. You played into the name, and worked real dragons, then tied them together in the garden. Well played.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Clever poem about snapdragons. You played into the name, and worked real dragons, then tied them together in the garden. Well played.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your positive comments.
Comment from Ogden
I'm not sure this qualifies, technically, as a haiku, but if it got by The Committee, who cares?
Your "Snapdragon" by any other form name, resonates the same.
Don
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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I'm not sure this qualifies, technically, as a haiku, but if it got by The Committee, who cares?
Your "Snapdragon" by any other form name, resonates the same.
Don
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your observations and encouraging words.
Comment from JP49
This is so clever. I love the humour it holds whilst, at the same time, being a perfect Haiku. I immediately thought of my own snapdragons and now can't wait until summertime. Well done and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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This is so clever. I love the humour it holds whilst, at the same time, being a perfect Haiku. I immediately thought of my own snapdragons and now can't wait until summertime. Well done and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
Thank you for your delightful remarks.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha, while the snapdragon in bloom may look like a lot like a tiny skull, they really lack any real "scare power".
I mean, c'mon, they're just a little flower for gosh sakes!
They do look awfully pretty in a fair garden, though, stalks and all, heh-heh.
It's a bit confusing as to which type of poem this contest wanted--a haiku or a 5/7/5.
They are most definitely NOT the same.
But your well-written entry qualifies as both, so no worries there.
Best wishes to you in the voting!
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Hahaha, while the snapdragon in bloom may look like a lot like a tiny skull, they really lack any real "scare power".
I mean, c'mon, they're just a little flower for gosh sakes!
They do look awfully pretty in a fair garden, though, stalks and all, heh-heh.
It's a bit confusing as to which type of poem this contest wanted--a haiku or a 5/7/5.
They are most definitely NOT the same.
But your well-written entry qualifies as both, so no worries there.
Best wishes to you in the voting!
~Dean :)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you, I always look forward to your reviews.
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
hahaha...
toothless snapdragon
breathes no fire, scares no damsels
just stalks fair gardens
this is awesome, funny and a well structured haiku. Good job and good luck my friend. You will probably get my vote. So far you are the best one.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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hahaha...
toothless snapdragon
breathes no fire, scares no damsels
just stalks fair gardens
this is awesome, funny and a well structured haiku. Good job and good luck my friend. You will probably get my vote. So far you are the best one.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
Yours is high praise indeed. Thank you very much.
