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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well set up mikey, great range of characters and it's easy to visualize. A good outcome for Charlie.
Just one typo
Your older - You're older
cheers,
valda
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Well set up mikey, great range of characters and it's easy to visualize. A good outcome for Charlie.
Just one typo
Your older - You're older
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh my goodness, this is just such a giggle, Mav. Donny and Darlene almost sounds like a John Cougar Mellencamp tune.
You write the best scripts and this absolutely deserves my last sixth star of the week.
Yeeeeeeeeeesssss.
Ange
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Oh my goodness, this is just such a giggle, Mav. Donny and Darlene almost sounds like a John Cougar Mellencamp tune.
You write the best scripts and this absolutely deserves my last sixth star of the week.
Yeeeeeeeeeesssss.
Ange
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
This is totally engrossing, Michael. I know this is mostly real life stuff and that adds to it I guess for me. But still, it would be fascinating anyway. You know the field, that is for sure. I hope to see much more of yhis. NG
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This is totally engrossing, Michael. I know this is mostly real life stuff and that adds to it I guess for me. But still, it would be fascinating anyway. You know the field, that is for sure. I hope to see much more of yhis. NG
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This sounds like an interesting bunch to be around. I don't know a lot about script, but it sounds good to me and that is what matters to any reader. Good work.
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Excellent. This sounds like an interesting bunch to be around. I don't know a lot about script, but it sounds good to me and that is what matters to any reader. Good work.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Your characterisation is stunning I laughed so much at this, you have a real talent for this sort of write and it is very impressive! Well done and look forward to reading more from you kindest regards Meia x
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Your characterisation is stunning I laughed so much at this, you have a real talent for this sort of write and it is very impressive! Well done and look forward to reading more from you kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
Comment from robyn corum
Mikey,
This was a fascinating read. I have to deal with a lot of 'head' issues, myself. *smile* For real, I mean. I won't go into it, but I could definitely relate. Thnaks!
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Mikey,
This was a fascinating read. I have to deal with a lot of 'head' issues, myself. *smile* For real, I mean. I won't go into it, but I could definitely relate. Thnaks!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017