Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Bill, where the heck do you get it from? I'm laughing and I hardly know why I am. But that's the talent you've got. I'm still chuckling. Well done. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017

Thank you, Ulla, for putting up with this. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Smart move, when you encounter a zombie, his intelligence is not important. If he is a zombie the best thing for you to do is to run in the opposite direction as fast as you can. Pass go and stop to collect two hundred dollars only if there is time, otherwise keep running.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017

Since this drawing was so bad, I figured I couldn't make it worse.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

"gararg arg arga," ... Zombir jargon ... creative. Sort of grim/funny-amusing.

Hi Bill,

I'm not an expert on tanka, so I'm probably not the best person to review this post.

As for the theme .. a zombie geek ... interesting!

I sort of 'heard' the words in my head as I read. This could be a grim, graveyard-kindergarten sort of performance piece, you know (spoken as a one[-time elementary school teacher who often did choral productions of Seuss!)

Good one!

Sonali

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017

This is a follow up to The Geek. Thank you, Selina, for reviewing. Bill

Comment from moonsunrise

Excellent

I enjoyed this tanka poem. I can see why everyone ran for their lives. Poor Zombie geek. He was only looking for his arm. I'm glad he was able to find it. Too bad his language wasn't understood.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017

Thank you, moon, for giving this a look. Bill

reply by moonsunrise on 24-Feb-2017

My pleasure.