Comment from Halfree

Excellent

Oh what the hell, got a chuckle from this posting. I grew up with limericks...most I cannot post on FS...well I choose not to. However, I did hear a lot of that art form. I must admit that on occasion I would try to compose a few lines. Anyway, liked your posting, took me back a little to my limerick days.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thanks, Halfree. I like limericks too. The good ones make me laugh.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Aiona, too bad you missed the contest. This limerick is wonderful and I couldn't help but laugh over your word choices and easy lines. Great job overall.
Thanks for sharing it.
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 Comment Written 22-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017

Thank you, Maureen. It's just as well. I should be focusing on my screenplay. :)

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi friend the story sounds very nice , specially when it involves a bullfighter. I wish I know what melagra is . So sorry.
Danny Jock

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017

Thanks, Danny. Melagra is arthritis.