Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I like this 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very good imagery and the wording was great too. This made me think of when I was younger and dating. Fun times! Teri

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017

Thank you, PF, for giving this a peek. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Depending on the response, the ride down could be the longest in history or it could be not even noticed because your emotions allowed you to float to the ground minutes before the ride ever stopped. I hope that was the case.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017

Thank you, nomi, for reviewing this. Bill

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

This is so funny and well written in your usual hilarious style Bill. I so enjoy everything you write this is fabulous well done love Meia x

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017

Thank you, Meia, for reviewing this. Bill

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Bill, Line three sure gave the impression it didn't go well, you managed to put so much into it I could feel the edge of refusal.
Great piece and perfect form.
Thanks for sharing.
m

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017

Thank you, Maureen, for for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Nice picture to illustrate the poem.

It seems she said no. Or you could be saying love is a hard road once it is accepted.
Either way it is a hard way down.

Keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017

Thank you, Joan, for the

reply by dragonpoet on 22-Feb-2017

No problem.

Joan