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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Very well done, Why am I not getting your notices anymore? I have to go to yur profile and find them. Is there a problem I don't know about? lol

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2017

Comment from nordicgirl
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You have written about this before. I love anything you write from a first hand experience and I especially like this play like yreatment. Cool to focus on the event and not what I know to be an eccentric gamily. That gives me a chance to sit there too and imagine it. I am a little young to remember much. This is great. I would love more, especially on the sixties in general. NG

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I like how you shared a moment in that day. It must have been a horror watching this on the news and I think you did an excellent job of showing that. Great job - an interesting read.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

Comment from robyn corum
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Mikey,

I wasn't aware of any of this. I was too young to know or to care. But I've read and heard about it all my adult life. I can't imagine the scene as it was happening. Wow. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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This is so thought provoking and well written! Very impressive and intelligently paced and thought out. A vision of a dystopian future(that actually took place in the past, which means that it could certainly happen again for real someday soon...we will find out, well done, kindest regards Meia :)

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

Comment from Pearl Edwards
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This is great the way you have told us this story through your young eyes, in the form of a script. And it's so true, adults try to protect the kids but they usually understand more than adults often think. Good job with this one mikey, just one typo -
Grandma - Windowed young - widowed (I'm thinking)
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017