A One
Ode to autumn7 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Your well-chosen words painted a very colorful world. Which is Autumn time. The artwork is beautiful. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. Your well-chosen words painted a very colorful world. Which is Autumn time. The artwork is beautiful. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, what a lovely presentation for your descriptive 5-7-5, and you've created a wonderful contrast between the cooler, darker days and the beautiful colors of autumn - this is going to be a hard contest to judge!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Oh, what a lovely presentation for your descriptive 5-7-5, and you've created a wonderful contrast between the cooler, darker days and the beautiful colors of autumn - this is going to be a hard contest to judge!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your review.
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Most welcome.
Comment from marybell1
I loved your 5-7-5 which was correct in lines and syllables. You painted a lovely picture and I liked your choice of photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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I loved your 5-7-5 which was correct in lines and syllables. You painted a lovely picture and I liked your choice of photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Bill Schott
This ode to autumn, A One, has a nice set up and seems to split the lighter side of autumn with the more depressing aspects of the season. The "cold, dark days of autumn" I guess are in between the colors.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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This ode to autumn, A One, has a nice set up and seems to split the lighter side of autumn with the more depressing aspects of the season. The "cold, dark days of autumn" I guess are in between the colors.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from ronnie k
A wonder defining of the beauty of our rainbows, the shy, rain and light but the cause you penned is a much better belief, beauty from within the world we live in creating such beauty.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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A wonder defining of the beauty of our rainbows, the shy, rain and light but the cause you penned is a much better belief, beauty from within the world we live in creating such beauty.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine 5-7-5 entry for the Ode contest
An excellent poem with fine imagery of autumn
and a very good reflective line
about the colors of the season
Excellent art work and presentation
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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This is a fine 5-7-5 entry for the Ode contest
An excellent poem with fine imagery of autumn
and a very good reflective line
about the colors of the season
Excellent art work and presentation
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes you have done well to paint a beautiful picture describing autumn and the art choice works very well good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Yes you have done well to paint a beautiful picture describing autumn and the art choice works very well good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thanks.