A Feast for the Senses
...sugar and spice and everything nice!5 total reviews
Comment from Ogden
A Haiku in Fall-figured dress, so to speak. "Gilded with gold" is a very nice touch of the season. Good work!
Now I want some pumpkin pie. I have to see wat's in the fridge.
Don
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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A Haiku in Fall-figured dress, so to speak. "Gilded with gold" is a very nice touch of the season. Good work!
Now I want some pumpkin pie. I have to see wat's in the fridge.
Don
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks!
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. The artwork and background color completed the piece well. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest.You have captured the feeling of Autumn in a few words.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. The artwork and background color completed the piece well. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest.You have captured the feeling of Autumn in a few words.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This ode to autumn, A Feast For the Senses, has a nice message, but there are too many syllables in the first line. Your 5-7-5 is currently a 7-7-5. If you lose the word 'baking', that will put you back on track. Happy day.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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This ode to autumn, A Feast For the Senses, has a nice message, but there are too many syllables in the first line. Your 5-7-5 is currently a 7-7-5. If you lose the word 'baking', that will put you back on track. Happy day.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Copied and pasted wrong. Have revised it. Thanks!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written an original approach to the contest beautifully displayed and syllable count is correct good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Yes this is well written an original approach to the contest beautifully displayed and syllable count is correct good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from William Ross
Pumpkin pie and spiced apple cider, sounds good to me. a good autumn 5.7.5. thanks for the share and good luck on this. have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Pumpkin pie and spiced apple cider, sounds good to me. a good autumn 5.7.5. thanks for the share and good luck on this. have a wonderful day
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you!