Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "The Company One Keeps"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
3 total reviews
Comment from Halfree
OK. this one quite clever and somewhat profound. Started out with a fiver, had a little coffee and read it again and decided I had not chosen the right star. Very well done and enjoyable...this goes into my Keeper File. Hang in there and keep writing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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OK. this one quite clever and somewhat profound. Started out with a fiver, had a little coffee and read it again and decided I had not chosen the right star. Very well done and enjoyable...this goes into my Keeper File. Hang in there and keep writing.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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LOL! Halfree, you're getting soft on me. I'm okay with < 4 stars you know. It's the feedback I need more. Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)
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I spend some time on each review. I might like a posting very much but there is something that causes me to wonder..or reread (I read a poem three to five times before I hit the keyboard). I like people of the written word and my preception of what is posted might well be off the target but it will be fair...I hope. Keep at it.
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I always enjoy your reviews, Halfree.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I don't understand. Do you mean there will be two plants or do you mean there will be two sharing the one plant? I know nothing about Lotus plants
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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I don't understand. Do you mean there will be two plants or do you mean there will be two sharing the one plant? I know nothing about Lotus plants
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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LOL! I was worried it would be misunderstood. I see I need to re-word this one.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nothing more should be expected than the obvious I suppose were one to do this, right, Aiona?
It's not like the white Lotus flowers color would be in any way influenced by the pink one.
Much the same could be said for the ways in which people of different races, religions and nationalities interact with each other.
An intriguing 3-Line Poem to be sure.
Good luck in the contest, and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Nothing more should be expected than the obvious I suppose were one to do this, right, Aiona?
It's not like the white Lotus flowers color would be in any way influenced by the pink one.
Much the same could be said for the ways in which people of different races, religions and nationalities interact with each other.
An intriguing 3-Line Poem to be sure.
Good luck in the contest, and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Dean.
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You're very welcome, it was my pleasure.
