Comment from Halfree

Exceptional

OK. this one quite clever and somewhat profound. Started out with a fiver, had a little coffee and read it again and decided I had not chosen the right star. Very well done and enjoyable...this goes into my Keeper File. Hang in there and keep writing.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

LOL! Halfree, you're getting soft on me. I'm okay with < 4 stars you know. It's the feedback I need more. Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)

reply by Halfree on 17-Feb-2017

I spend some time on each review. I might like a posting very much but there is something that causes me to wonder..or reread (I read a poem three to five times before I hit the keyboard). I like people of the written word and my preception of what is posted might well be off the target but it will be fair...I hope. Keep at it.

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017

I always enjoy your reviews, Halfree.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I don't understand. Do you mean there will be two plants or do you mean there will be two sharing the one plant? I know nothing about Lotus plants

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

LOL! I was worried it would be misunderstood. I see I need to re-word this one.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Nothing more should be expected than the obvious I suppose were one to do this, right, Aiona?
It's not like the white Lotus flowers color would be in any way influenced by the pink one.
Much the same could be said for the ways in which people of different races, religions and nationalities interact with each other.
An intriguing 3-Line Poem to be sure.
Good luck in the contest, and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thank you, Dean.

reply by Dean Kuch on 16-Feb-2017

You're very welcome, it was my pleasure.