Why Does Love Have To Be So Sad?
Free verse49 total reviews
Comment from Mariana Frias
Greatly done so. IO loved this piece too Luna. really wonderfully done. Life just simply can't be all fun and games. There is no point in believing this. You are always speaking very true lessons to learn. I love your poetry and what it has to offer. Great job. A small suggestion, only a suggestion, please do not get mad at me, another good ending could be that he was cheating on her with someone, as many men often do. Especially, when they pretend to be oh so very kind, nice and naïve. You don't have to take my word for it, this is a comment. But your ending works wonders up my very spine. Thus I absolutely enjoyed your poetry piece.
Mariana
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Greatly done so. IO loved this piece too Luna. really wonderfully done. Life just simply can't be all fun and games. There is no point in believing this. You are always speaking very true lessons to learn. I love your poetry and what it has to offer. Great job. A small suggestion, only a suggestion, please do not get mad at me, another good ending could be that he was cheating on her with someone, as many men often do. Especially, when they pretend to be oh so very kind, nice and naïve. You don't have to take my word for it, this is a comment. But your ending works wonders up my very spine. Thus I absolutely enjoyed your poetry piece.
Mariana
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned immediately came to mind as I read this.
Brilliant the way you twisted this at the end by taking his life vs. taking his love.
Excellent presentation...love the photograph. Terrific write!
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Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned immediately came to mind as I read this.
Brilliant the way you twisted this at the end by taking his life vs. taking his love.
Excellent presentation...love the photograph. Terrific write!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Scary stuff, my friend!
Never mess with that woman scorned!!
See, we don't all just sit back and take it.
Great poem, lots of ghoulish fun!
Take care,
Rhonda
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Scary stuff, my friend!
Never mess with that woman scorned!!
See, we don't all just sit back and take it.
Great poem, lots of ghoulish fun!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Oh my what a poem filled to the rim with sarcasm. I so know this feeling spoken well between the lines of your well written creation.
Ahhhh sugar and spice and everything nice.
Milk and honey not so funny anymore.
Well done, Luna. I do hope all is well.
Jewell
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Oh my what a poem filled to the rim with sarcasm. I so know this feeling spoken well between the lines of your well written creation.
Ahhhh sugar and spice and everything nice.
Milk and honey not so funny anymore.
Well done, Luna. I do hope all is well.
Jewell
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
Comment from Mitchell Brontë
Love this grisly twist, what a clever free verse poem you have written.
Love the stanza......This purloined love,.....brilliant.
Great artwork
Thanks for sharing
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Love this grisly twist, what a clever free verse poem you have written.
Love the stanza......This purloined love,.....brilliant.
Great artwork
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
Comment from johnwilson
This is an incredibly written poem. I loved it from beginning to end...Death becomes him, don't you agree? is my favorite line; however, everything works in this Mid-English type piece. Not to say it doesn't speak in our language NOW, it does. Bravo!
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This is an incredibly written poem. I loved it from beginning to end...Death becomes him, don't you agree? is my favorite line; however, everything works in this Mid-English type piece. Not to say it doesn't speak in our language NOW, it does. Bravo!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
Comment from nomi338
Beware of the heart you steal. Not all who have their lovers stolen away, mourn in silence or acceptance. Some plot revenge in ways that might harm the guilty, not always thought of or expected. This is good, I enjoyed it with a slight chill, as I thought back for memory of anyone I might have betrayed in the past. LOL.
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Beware of the heart you steal. Not all who have their lovers stolen away, mourn in silence or acceptance. Some plot revenge in ways that might harm the guilty, not always thought of or expected. This is good, I enjoyed it with a slight chill, as I thought back for memory of anyone I might have betrayed in the past. LOL.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
Comment from Sis Cat
Sweet revenge, indeed. All more reason not to have a spot of tea with your ex when you are dating someone else. I enjoyed the dialogue of your poem in the form of a one way conversation between a wronged woman and the woman who purloined her man. Revenge poetry reminded me of poem my mother wrote after her divorces. Poetry is an ideal form to imagine alternatives without doing them. I sensed the protagonist in your poem called the new girlfriend with the sad news.
Thank you for sharing.
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Sweet revenge, indeed. All more reason not to have a spot of tea with your ex when you are dating someone else. I enjoyed the dialogue of your poem in the form of a one way conversation between a wronged woman and the woman who purloined her man. Revenge poetry reminded me of poem my mother wrote after her divorces. Poetry is an ideal form to imagine alternatives without doing them. I sensed the protagonist in your poem called the new girlfriend with the sad news.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
Comment from dmt1967
This poem is so cool. She would rather shoot him than let him go to another. They say if you love someone let them go but I like the poets way best lol. Thank you for sharing and have a great week.
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This poem is so cool. She would rather shoot him than let him go to another. They say if you love someone let them go but I like the poets way best lol. Thank you for sharing and have a great week.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
Comment from crybry67
Revenge does seem to be a sweet treat when we have been hurt badly. I must admit, I did not see that end, or should I say his end, coming. Good one, Jeni. Blessings.. Christy
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Revenge does seem to be a sweet treat when we have been hurt badly. I must admit, I did not see that end, or should I say his end, coming. Good one, Jeni. Blessings.. Christy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
