Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Merlin v. Dream Master"a place to gather my poetic forms
55 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
Great artwork to compliment your great story/poem. I did like it so much. History tells us that Merlin did indeed exist. Also he was seer to King Arthur. Thanks so much for writing this - green is the colour of go!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Great artwork to compliment your great story/poem. I did like it so much. History tells us that Merlin did indeed exist. Also he was seer to King Arthur. Thanks so much for writing this - green is the colour of go!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Dear Aussie - Thank you for your kind words for this poem, I appreciate your review and support.
Best,
Luna
Comment from mermaids
Awesome fantasy poetry here. Love how Merlin is chased away by Luna and the Dream Master, off to Hades he is sent. I admire your shape poem with a smooth use of rhyming words. You have created a beautiful poem here.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Awesome fantasy poetry here. Love how Merlin is chased away by Luna and the Dream Master, off to Hades he is sent. I admire your shape poem with a smooth use of rhyming words. You have created a beautiful poem here.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Thank you for amazing six-star review, mermaids. I'm thrilled and honored. I'm glad you liked the poem so well.
Thank you again.
Best,
jeni
Comment from mvbrooks
Cute story line with the familiar "Merlin" and they the poet "Luna" added for "good measure. Meets the line and syllable count while being playful.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Cute story line with the familiar "Merlin" and they the poet "Luna" added for "good measure. Meets the line and syllable count while being playful.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Thanks so very much!
Best,
jeni
Comment from nomi338
Hope your plans work out, if Merlin catches on you and Magician could be in for a difficult ride. Merlin's magic wand is so powerful it cannot reside within his pants, I have heard he usually walks about with it in his hand so that it is available upon demand.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Hope your plans work out, if Merlin catches on you and Magician could be in for a difficult ride. Merlin's magic wand is so powerful it cannot reside within his pants, I have heard he usually walks about with it in his hand so that it is available upon demand.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Thank you so very much, nomi, this review is a funny one.
Best,
jeni
Comment from Franklin Price
Luna, you have written two in a row that I have found very interesting. I got a little lost in the full object of this one. You could clear this up a little if you say that the Luna is you. Presentation, picture, color and poetry form are very well done. I liked it.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Luna, you have written two in a row that I have found very interesting. I got a little lost in the full object of this one. You could clear this up a little if you say that the Luna is you. Presentation, picture, color and poetry form are very well done. I liked it.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Why, thank you very much, Franklin Price. I'm glad you liked it. Luna is my muse, actually.
Best,
jeni
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How could I have not seen that Luna is your muse; and excellent one too.
Comment from RGstar
Your diversity is noted. A touch of mystique. I wouldn't call it horror, or fantasy...perhaps, magic, a little on the darker side.
Good imagination. Merlin is a particular favorite of mine.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Your diversity is noted. A touch of mystique. I wouldn't call it horror, or fantasy...perhaps, magic, a little on the darker side.
Good imagination. Merlin is a particular favorite of mine.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Hi, RG,
And he is a particular favorite of mine to, although he keeps messing with Luna and the Dream Master, so they have to give him his comeuppance.
Thanks for the review and support.
Best,
jeni
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Interesting and fanciful, as most of your poems tend to me, which is their charm. Often edging on the dark side, they pull me in with their uniqueness and 'other worldly' sense.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Interesting and fanciful, as most of your poems tend to me, which is their charm. Often edging on the dark side, they pull me in with their uniqueness and 'other worldly' sense.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Rhonda, for your complimentary and interesting review. It really helps to know what my readers enjoy and what they think of my writing style. I appreciate your support.
Best,
jeni
Comment from dragonpoet
NIcely done doubleetheree and rhyming too. You have to know his spell to use his wand to reverse it. So you can use the wand on Merlin to exile him. But Hell is a harsh punishment. I always wondered if a magician could get or make another wand if his was lost or stolen.
Keep writing.
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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NIcely done doubleetheree and rhyming too. You have to know his spell to use his wand to reverse it. So you can use the wand on Merlin to exile him. But Hell is a harsh punishment. I always wondered if a magician could get or make another wand if his was lost or stolen.
Keep writing.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Merlin can probably get another wand, but they didn't steal it, they just used it on him. The three are really friends, but Merlin is often messing with Luna and the DreamMaster (playing practical jokes) and they wanted to give him his comeuppance. They won't make him stay there long.
Thanks, Joan,
jeni
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I guess he deserves a short stay. It might teach him a lesson.
Joan
Comment from rjuselius
Although I really love mythical creatures, I don't get your poem dear jeni.. I'm at lost with all the characters.
Anyhow, thanks for sharing! If you wish to explain, please do.
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Although I really love mythical creatures, I don't get your poem dear jeni.. I'm at lost with all the characters.
Anyhow, thanks for sharing! If you wish to explain, please do.
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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bekka, dear, let me explain:
These are characters when I was active on the site before and I still use them in my work. Luna, my muse, loves to get me from my sleep and we both go to the moon to play. The Dream Master, a special friend of Luna's, is the one that humans go to to ask for glorious dreams or adventures, and he usually grants them. Of course you know who Merlin is.
The three of them are friends, but Merlin is always playing practical jokes on Luna and the Dream Master. This time they decided to give him his comeuppance. They're not going to make him stay in Hades that long.
Hope that explains it. Let me know if not.
Love,
Jeni
Comment from GWinterwin
I like the form in which this is written. The picture is good, and the fluorescent letters look neat. The word flow, and rhyming is very good. Merlin the magician is a good poem.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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I like the form in which this is written. The picture is good, and the fluorescent letters look neat. The word flow, and rhyming is very good. Merlin the magician is a good poem.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the kind words of review on this poem, and for the support.
Yours,
Jeni
