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Daughter's Visit

Daughter's in England for 1 yr. and coming home for visit

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Comment from Laidy
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I can't wait until my kids are old enough to really appreciate this poem. My daughters... Older and mature. It's something humorous to think about now that they are only 4 and 6. I thought your poem was pretty.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
    What an honorable thing to say. I so appreciate your enthusiasm over this poem. thxs so much for stopping by

    lulube
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good ten word poem you have penned. I know you have to be excited to see her. You used very good wording and imagery! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
    thxs for stopping by and for your awesome comments.

    lulube excited, who me? lol
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is a lovely expression of family love, but it does not meet the contest requirements. You are supposed to write a poem in ten WORDS and you wrote one made up of ten syllables. I hope you have time to fix it as it is a nice approach to the prompt. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
    thxs for the info, I have redone, did it make it through to the contest entry?

    lulube