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Brick wall

Trump's early day's in office

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Comment from Rasmine
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OMFG! I am laughing my head off. Where did you get this great picture? Thank you, for giving me a giggle when this bully in the white house scares the crap out of me. :)

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
    Cheers for the feedback, have a great day
Comment from frogbook
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Excellent in subject as well as a clever and inventive way of saying this. Not to mention the picture that gives the reader a big laugh-at least this reader. So far not too many entries with nice things to say though, so hopefully no crying about "insulting" the nice new pres-ha. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much
Comment from Aiona
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What an inventive haiku! It follows the 5-7-5 structure and includes creative use of puns that are relevant to the social situation.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much, glad you got it.
Comment from BeasPeas
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He's my man. Yay, Donald! The money we spend on benefits for illegals will pay for the wall in no time, plus there is 8 billion $ never spent to erect the first fence because they never built it. Every sovereign country must have borders or they are not sovereign. Come in legally and be welcomed. I do like your 5-7-5, though. Play on word "toupee" is priceless as is the image of the kitty. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
    I,m British so unsure if he will be a good thing or not, time will tell.
    Deliberately did this tongue in cheek glad you enjoyed it.
reply by BeasPeas on 28-Jan-2017
    I saw that in your profile. We are thrilled to have Theresa May as his first visiting dignitary. Marilyn
Comment from mbroyles2
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I guess Trump looked at Mexico and said "Who cares?"
Only the fastest growing minority population in America.
Foreign Policy is proving not to be a strong suite for him.
Love the picture and the reference of hitting a brick wall.
How fitting.
Michael

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
    Thank you very much
Comment from Mark Valentine
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It took me a moment to get the pun in the first line - I love it. So timely and evocative. You carry the hair theme throughout and the allusion to the wall and who'll pay is ripped from today's headlines. Wonderful - I'm sure it will do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much