Stunned!
Something I long to see again....5 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
I wish that too!! So many people are against this man. He is psychologically unfit to run a country. He is a bully--and they belong at the principal's office. LOL
Good poem.
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I wish that too!! So many people are against this man. He is psychologically unfit to run a country. He is a bully--and they belong at the principal's office. LOL
Good poem.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
Comment from frogbook
Hahaha. I bet that would bring a HHHUGE!!! audience-haha. We can dream I guess. Great one with a wonderful sense of humor. Best of luck (for the contest and the dream come true)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Hahaha. I bet that would bring a HHHUGE!!! audience-haha. We can dream I guess. Great one with a wonderful sense of humor. Best of luck (for the contest and the dream come true)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks - I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hahaha ... yeah, that is right, I wish that day comes soon and before that idiot gets us all killed. Great 5/7/5, my friend. Good luck!
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Hahaha ... yeah, that is right, I wish that day comes soon and before that idiot gets us all killed. Great 5/7/5, my friend. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I think you may want to check your syllable count for this one. I think line one has 6, and line three only has 4.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
I think you may want to check your syllable count for this one. I think line one has 6, and line three only has 4.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
Comment from marybell1
It is interesting to see many for Trump and many against, so an interesting thought although I notice you only have four syllables in the last line and not being an American I am not sure on the word 'victorious'. How many syllables you count there. Cheers.
Marybell1.
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It is interesting to see many for Trump and many against, so an interesting thought although I notice you only have four syllables in the last line and not being an American I am not sure on the word 'victorious'. How many syllables you count there. Cheers.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017