Another Hospital Visit
Exactly 100 words...32 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! This is beautifully penned and such a delightful read. I guess after so many mishaps it might look like you were bad luck, on the other hand, perhaps had you not been by her side things might have ended much worse - making you a guardian angel (working overtime). Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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LOL! This is beautifully penned and such a delightful read. I guess after so many mishaps it might look like you were bad luck, on the other hand, perhaps had you not been by her side things might have ended much worse - making you a guardian angel (working overtime). Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review my friend, I appreciate it. I'm glad that you liked it. Enjoy your Sunday...Bill
Comment from mvbrooks
There's a nice sense of warmth, caring, and familiarity shared between this couple. Humor seems appropriate for the circumstances of this story. Nice 'slice-of-life" story.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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There's a nice sense of warmth, caring, and familiarity shared between this couple. Humor seems appropriate for the circumstances of this story. Nice 'slice-of-life" story.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great weekend...Bill
Comment from TheWriteTeach
I love this piece. I read it in the voting booth and gave you my vote. Congratulations on the well-deserved win. I liked the ending. I never saw it coming. It was good humor and made me laugh out loud. Nice job with this.
Suzanne
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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I love this piece. I read it in the voting booth and gave you my vote. Congratulations on the well-deserved win. I liked the ending. I never saw it coming. It was good humor and made me laugh out loud. Nice job with this.
Suzanne
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you so very much Suzanne for your great review and rating, I really appreciate it. And, thanks also for your vote. I'm glad it made you laugh, that makes it all worth while. Enjoy your Sunday my friend...Bill
Comment from Fridayauthor
You wonderful little story certainly points out that less is often better than more, in words, that is!
Great job with this posting. It truly is a winner!
I can relate...after fifty-two years of marriage!
Thank you!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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You wonderful little story certainly points out that less is often better than more, in words, that is!
Great job with this posting. It truly is a winner!
I can relate...after fifty-two years of marriage!
Thank you!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks my friend for your excellent review, I appreciate it...Thank you and congratulations on your 52 years of marriage. There's not many couples that can say that. My wife and I will have been together 50 years this November. Enjoy your weekend...Bill
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Congratulations on the win. It is funny with the wife's thoughts about her accidents. In real life, they(the law) might consider you as an abuser. This is an exceptional contest winner written with many thought provoking issues my friend. Well done!
Jim
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Congratulations on the win. It is funny with the wife's thoughts about her accidents. In real life, they(the law) might consider you as an abuser. This is an exceptional contest winner written with many thought provoking issues my friend. Well done!
Jim
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you Jim for your exceptional review and all those shiny stars, I really appreciate it. I agree with you, in real life the law would probably be watching me pretty close (ha).
You know Jim, after all the years you and I have been members here, I believe this is the first time (not sure) that we've ever spoken to each other. If so, I'm glad to meet you. Take care and have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from Mabaker
Oh dear another little one. They are so hard to write and harder still to review, but here goes. I would advise the lady to get a new husband or perhaps he's a gaurdian angel? Well writtten hope you do well in the contest. Regards Mabaker.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Oh dear another little one. They are so hard to write and harder still to review, but here goes. I would advise the lady to get a new husband or perhaps he's a gaurdian angel? Well writtten hope you do well in the contest. Regards Mabaker.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend for your excellent review, I appreciate it. You're right, these shorties are very hard to review, but you did a great job with this one. Enjoy your weekend...Bill
Comment from marinadawn
This was a very nice read initially I thought Another hospital visit was expecting a description of pain or something but this gave me a good old chuckle , for the conclusion was so unexpected yet still heart warming
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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This was a very nice read initially I thought Another hospital visit was expecting a description of pain or something but this gave me a good old chuckle , for the conclusion was so unexpected yet still heart warming
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, I really appreciate it. I'm also glad you got a chuckle from reading it, that makes my day. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is a joke my partner often says to me, so an oldie but a goodie, in truth I think I AM somewhat of a Jinx! However you have seamlessly moved a joke into a fantastic 100 word story, not easy, picture complemented the whole thing and a very witty and clever write, brilliant. Kind regards, Meia :)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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This is a joke my partner often says to me, so an oldie but a goodie, in truth I think I AM somewhat of a Jinx! However you have seamlessly moved a joke into a fantastic 100 word story, not easy, picture complemented the whole thing and a very witty and clever write, brilliant. Kind regards, Meia :)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you Meia for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a nice weekend. Bill
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Ha ha - I would think the same - mind, when you've
been together for so long, you end up spending a
great deal of the time together....
and they do say - do things together.
such as
visit hospital; the dentist; the chiropractor and such --- all such fun when one gets older.
I like this - no wonder it was a winner - congratulations.
Margaret
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Ha ha - I would think the same - mind, when you've
been together for so long, you end up spending a
great deal of the time together....
and they do say - do things together.
such as
visit hospital; the dentist; the chiropractor and such --- all such fun when one gets older.
I like this - no wonder it was a winner - congratulations.
Margaret
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you Margaret for your nice comments, I appreciate it. I haven't spoken to you for a long time, how have you been? Enjoy your weekend my friend...Bill
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Due to ill health, and editing finished books when I felt up to it, I wasn't online all last year - but am picking up well now. Hope all is well with you, Bill. M
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It's great news to hear that you're doing much better Margaret. I still struggle with MG (a form of MS) on a daily basis, for the last 24 years now. Thanks for asking. Take care of yourself and keep writing...Bill
Comment from mbroyles2
Poor Bill.
He was there every time she got hurt, stands to reason why he could be bad luck.
I can easily see why this one the contest.
Really great writing!
Michael
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Poor Bill.
He was there every time she got hurt, stands to reason why he could be bad luck.
I can easily see why this one the contest.
Really great writing!
Michael
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much Michael for your excellent review, I really appreciate it. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
