Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "A Diamante in the Rough"a place to gather my poetic forms
27 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done diamante that reminds us that something hidden in the mist can be beautiful and inviting when you are out of the mist. Whether it is a big castle of a small bungalow.
Joan
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This is a well done diamante that reminds us that something hidden in the mist can be beautiful and inviting when you are out of the mist. Whether it is a big castle of a small bungalow.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
The Diamante is one of my favorite poetic forms! I love the way you wove it masterfully with your castle to cottage theme.
Clever title to go with your poem. Very fitting!
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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The Diamante is one of my favorite poetic forms! I love the way you wove it masterfully with your castle to cottage theme.
Clever title to go with your poem. Very fitting!
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Rhonda! I'm happy that you enjoyed! Take care.
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding, Moonchild. (There....see....I must be a friend of yours now. LOL This is clever poetry. Is this a creatrion of yours or something you are following on the site? sorry, I obviously missed the one where you asked for a title. Bless you, my friend. I enjoyed this. Bob
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Outstanding, Moonchild. (There....see....I must be a friend of yours now. LOL This is clever poetry. Is this a creatrion of yours or something you are following on the site? sorry, I obviously missed the one where you asked for a title. Bless you, my friend. I enjoyed this. Bob
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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You are indeed a friend of mine, Mr. Bob! I'm happy that you noticed that. This isn't a creation of mine but a poetry form gleaned from Shadowpoetry.com. Thanks for the kind review, Friend.
Comment from GWinterwin
Yes a good poem with a great picture to set the story. With the fog keeping the clear picture obscured. Good job with the words used to follow the diagram, and yet tell a story also.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Yes a good poem with a great picture to set the story. With the fog keeping the clear picture obscured. Good job with the words used to follow the diagram, and yet tell a story also.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your very kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from closetpoetjester
What a clever poem you've penned and I've not seen this format before. I liked the way it shifted as one mans castle was merely reduced to the size of a cottage with your clever twists and turns. Vivid and haunting to cozy and comfy...
I certainly didn't end up where I expected and what a nice surprise. With that said, I'll be on guard next time I see this form haha
Well written Luna A most disturbing fascinating read LOL
Cheers P
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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What a clever poem you've penned and I've not seen this format before. I liked the way it shifted as one mans castle was merely reduced to the size of a cottage with your clever twists and turns. Vivid and haunting to cozy and comfy...
I certainly didn't end up where I expected and what a nice surprise. With that said, I'll be on guard next time I see this form haha
Well written Luna A most disturbing fascinating read LOL
Cheers P
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, P. You said quite a lot in this review and I enjoyed reading it. I appreciate you reading my poems and your continuing support.
Comment from sunnilicious
You're hilarious. I love the title of this poem, but let it not be a replacement for diamond jewels. Well thought out and nicely written. Great visual imagery created. Enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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You're hilarious. I love the title of this poem, but let it not be a replacement for diamond jewels. Well thought out and nicely written. Great visual imagery created. Enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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haha Actually the title came from Dean Kuch. Thanks for the read and review, glad you enjoyed.
Comment from crybry67
Great job on your Diamante, Jeni. Wonderful imagery presented in such few words. This looks to be an interesting form. I like contrasts. Blessings.. Christy
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Great job on your Diamante, Jeni. Wonderful imagery presented in such few words. This looks to be an interesting form. I like contrasts. Blessings.. Christy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Hi, Christy, thanks for the kind review. I always appreciate what you have to say.
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi jeni,
I am anything but a poet. I have no idea about the technical aspect of writing poetry, or the various stiles, with the exception of a Haiku. But I do know what I enjoy reading. I lived in Europe almost 12 years and have seen and visited dozens of castles. You quite nicely summed up the various emotions one can conceive before and then, after entering such a foreboding structure.
I particularly enjoyed this one. Well done! Warmest wishes,
Alan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Hi jeni,
I am anything but a poet. I have no idea about the technical aspect of writing poetry, or the various stiles, with the exception of a Haiku. But I do know what I enjoy reading. I lived in Europe almost 12 years and have seen and visited dozens of castles. You quite nicely summed up the various emotions one can conceive before and then, after entering such a foreboding structure.
I particularly enjoyed this one. Well done! Warmest wishes,
Alan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Hi, Alan. I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. Blessings to you!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You followed the rules spot on and thank you for including the notes for us to read. I love the haunting part of the castle as the ones I thought of were elegant but you took it from there to the beauty of the cottage. Nicely done
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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You followed the rules spot on and thank you for including the notes for us to read. I love the haunting part of the castle as the ones I thought of were elegant but you took it from there to the beauty of the cottage. Nicely done
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Barb, I''m happy that you understood what I was trying to do!
Comment from Lu Saluna
This looks like a bit of an expansion on the Antonym poetry form. I think I like this one better. Takes a little more thought and creativity than just simple dictionary definitions. I think you have done a great with this poetry form and I really like it.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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This looks like a bit of an expansion on the Antonym poetry form. I think I like this one better. Takes a little more thought and creativity than just simple dictionary definitions. I think you have done a great with this poetry form and I really like it.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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This is a long-established form, Lu. I like this one too. Thanks for your read and kind review.
