Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Seasons"a place to gather my poetic forms
51 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your smooth poetic flow reminds me that spring will arrive with all her beauty. I like the images of nature you describe, ducklings and daffodils, wonderful pictures of nature and the warm weather to come.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Your smooth poetic flow reminds me that spring will arrive with all her beauty. I like the images of nature you describe, ducklings and daffodils, wonderful pictures of nature and the warm weather to come.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Wow, mermaids, this is another lovely review from you! I do so appreciate the time you take to read my poems and let me know how you feel about them.
Best,
jeni
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, Jeni, a truly lovely and shining sojourn into life's seasons - well constructed with fluid and perfect rhyme - wistful in its rendering. I very much appreciated and could relate to your tribute to your son. My own child was also an addict and took her own life in 2008, 2 days before her 48th birthday. My tribute to her is also on this site, titled, "Her First Words: A Belated Eulogy"... Eve
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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In my opinion, Jeni, a truly lovely and shining sojourn into life's seasons - well constructed with fluid and perfect rhyme - wistful in its rendering. I very much appreciated and could relate to your tribute to your son. My own child was also an addict and took her own life in 2008, 2 days before her 48th birthday. My tribute to her is also on this site, titled, "Her First Words: A Belated Eulogy"... Eve
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Dear Eve,
How sorry I am for your loss. I'll definitely read your poem of tribute to her;; I know how intense the pain can be, no matter how far back in time the event it never goes away. Thank you for reading my poem and for giving it such a fine review. Again, you have my condolences.
Love,
Jeni
Oh, geez, thank you for the six-star rating! That's awesome and I'm humbled, honored and grateful.
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Dear Jeni,
Thank you so much for your kind words of comfort - you are so right - the pain never really leaves. Mine has become an ache that is ever present. Since Sabrina and I were estranged, it makes the sense of loss even more palpable. I dream of her often, but in my dreams she is always a child. I believe it's my consciousness attempting to spare me from more pain somehow. I also notice little girls who somewhat resemble her, and for those brief moments, I am transported back in time.
You are so very welcome, Jeni - your poem is very special, and the Six Star rating extremely appropriate...Eve
Comment from stevensandiego
It was easy reading for me.. well constructed.
rhyme flowed well , would appeal to all ages. It had an interesting
message to convey. would recommend it to my friends
I picked this poem because the subject interested me.teven
Steven San Diegp
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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It was easy reading for me.. well constructed.
rhyme flowed well , would appeal to all ages. It had an interesting
message to convey. would recommend it to my friends
I picked this poem because the subject interested me.teven
Steven San Diegp
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Dear Steven, thank you for your comments on this poem, the rhyme appealing to all ages touches me. I'm happy that you would recommend it to your friends.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh goodness! This was just beautiful! You do know you have a new fan in me, yes? (LOL - in case you haven't guessed already, I love your poetry). Your description of the seasons is refreshing - quite different. (Who ever thinks to mention the Amish farmer?) I loved it!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Oh goodness! This was just beautiful! You do know you have a new fan in me, yes? (LOL - in case you haven't guessed already, I love your poetry). Your description of the seasons is refreshing - quite different. (Who ever thinks to mention the Amish farmer?) I loved it!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks Dawn, and also for the fanship (if that's what you'd call it lol). I mentioned the Amish farmer because I live smack dab in the middle of 'Amish country in Lancaster County, PA. I'm happy you liked this one.
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Oh, how wonderful! I enjoyed the countryside in Ontario (surrounding Kitchener area) when I lived there purely because of the Amish farms. You're very welcome.
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautiful seasonal piece of poetry dear jen! You have captured the essence of each other season and you have written it in poetic talent. As being rather a young writer on this site you have secured your place in our hearts.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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This is a beautiful seasonal piece of poetry dear jen! You have captured the essence of each other season and you have written it in poetic talent. As being rather a young writer on this site you have secured your place in our hearts.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Aww, rebekka, that's so nice of you! I'm warmed by your words in your review. Thank you, my dear! And thanks again for the six-stars!
Love,
jeni
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Entirely my pleasure 😊 hugs
Comment from robyn corum
I did! You have the whole year here in your poem, and what struck me as I read it, is that THIS is about how fast the year seems to go by for me nowadays! hahahaha A fun read! The rhymes were enjoyable and entertaining. Thanks!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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I did! You have the whole year here in your poem, and what struck me as I read it, is that THIS is about how fast the year seems to go by for me nowadays! hahahaha A fun read! The rhymes were enjoyable and entertaining. Thanks!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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I'm happy that you liked this poem, robyn. And appreciate your kind review. Thanks!
Comment from dmt1967
This is such a great poem and paints such a great winter picture. It reminds me of the John Lewis advertisement over the Christmas season. I liked the picture as well. Thank you for sharing. Just realised, you are talking about The Bear as in the star collimation... Sorry.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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This is such a great poem and paints such a great winter picture. It reminds me of the John Lewis advertisement over the Christmas season. I liked the picture as well. Thank you for sharing. Just realised, you are talking about The Bear as in the star collimation... Sorry.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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No, I'm talking about the constellation Orion. Thanks for your kind review and for reading my poem. Look up Orion on the web, there's plenty of pictures of him!
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with good word flow and rhyming to tell of the passing seasons. Yes the different things of each season is so important to remember. Great job, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Good poem with good word flow and rhyming to tell of the passing seasons. Yes the different things of each season is so important to remember. Great job, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and for leaving me this kind review.
Comment from sunnilicious
Hahaha, I like the irony between the title and your name. The sky above with all the stars and planets sure is amazing. Well thought out and nicely written. Great visual imagery created. Nice lyrical flow of rhythm. Great work.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Hahaha, I like the irony between the title and your name. The sky above with all the stars and planets sure is amazing. Well thought out and nicely written. Great visual imagery created. Nice lyrical flow of rhythm. Great work.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for reading this poem and for leaving me your gracious review.
Comment from azwildrosa
What great imagery you have going on with each stanza. It cold here now. Your poems some what take the chill away. Witch makes for a great read. Thank you for sharing, I'm looking forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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What great imagery you have going on with each stanza. It cold here now. Your poems some what take the chill away. Witch makes for a great read. Thank you for sharing, I'm looking forward to reading more.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Oh, I'm glad that my poem takes some of the chill away, that's a lovely thing to say! Thanks for reading my poem and for your gracious review.
