A Winter's Wedding
...a joyful moment18 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Beautiful tanka. She must be nuts..no way would I be running, in snow no less, in heels, ha ha. A lovely winter wedding tanka!!! Good luck, blessings...
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Beautiful tanka. She must be nuts..no way would I be running, in snow no less, in heels, ha ha. A lovely winter wedding tanka!!! Good luck, blessings...
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend for your review and very kind comments. They are greatly appreciated. Love...Portia
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You are so welcome dear...
Comment from Janet Foor
An amazing picture to accompany this delightful winter wedding scene. My daughter married in the winter (the first time) but that's another story. It was beautiful and magical and you have captured all that here in your wedding day poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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An amazing picture to accompany this delightful winter wedding scene. My daughter married in the winter (the first time) but that's another story. It was beautiful and magical and you have captured all that here in your wedding day poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....Portia
Comment from Marykelly
The snowy cold setting seems a good contrast for the fiery passion of the bride and groom. In this very short poem you have created a vivid image of the bride and groom running through the snow and the emotional context speaks for itself.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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The snowy cold setting seems a good contrast for the fiery passion of the bride and groom. In this very short poem you have created a vivid image of the bride and groom running through the snow and the emotional context speaks for itself.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments. Blessings.....Portia
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Wow, a winter wonderland runaway wedding! This is awesome and a brilliant idea for a winter Tanka. I enjoyed it very much and the picture is a great addition to it. Well done kindest regards, Meia :)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Wow, a winter wonderland runaway wedding! This is awesome and a brilliant idea for a winter Tanka. I enjoyed it very much and the picture is a great addition to it. Well done kindest regards, Meia :)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Meia,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.....Portia
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written winter tanka. A winter wedding is always beautiful and magical. Snow on a wedding day will be remembered for life.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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A very well-written winter tanka. A winter wedding is always beautiful and magical. Snow on a wedding day will be remembered for life.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Sandra,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.....Portia
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
I love the contrast 'twixt winter's coldness and the heat of passion's fiery, frenzied love in your poem. Good alliteration with "blissful bride" and "fiery frenzied". A new love is a wonderful thing! Great picture to complement your poem!
Very nice! Good luck in the Winter Tanka contest!
Connie
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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I love the contrast 'twixt winter's coldness and the heat of passion's fiery, frenzied love in your poem. Good alliteration with "blissful bride" and "fiery frenzied". A new love is a wonderful thing! Great picture to complement your poem!
Very nice! Good luck in the Winter Tanka contest!
Connie
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....Portia
Comment from flylikeaneagle
What a wedding to remember. My niece was also in a winter snowy
wedding last April 30. What fun to be outside for photos. Yes, I like
your photo and passion deep in their hearts. Great entry and memories.
flylikeaneagle
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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What a wedding to remember. My niece was also in a winter snowy
wedding last April 30. What fun to be outside for photos. Yes, I like
your photo and passion deep in their hearts. Great entry and memories.
flylikeaneagle
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Nancy,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....Portia
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very well written tanka, Anonymous Poet. Your syllable count is good, there is concrete imagery portrayed in your first two lines.
Your pivot line is perfect. That enables your poem, in part, to be read in reverse and have it sound just as good.
Great job with this.
Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Very well written tanka, Anonymous Poet. Your syllable count is good, there is concrete imagery portrayed in your first two lines.
Your pivot line is perfect. That enables your poem, in part, to be read in reverse and have it sound just as good.
Great job with this.
Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thank you for such a great review.....
