Comment from azwildrosa

Excellent

What a nice poem. I don't much care for weddings. Perhaps because my marriage didn't work out. I guess I can enjoy everyone else. No need to spread my negative seed. This is a nice read. A sweet entry for the prompt. lol or should I say chilling. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes to you in the booths.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for your review, comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....Portia

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

What a great photograph as if the couple were inside a snow globe. The words work well on their own and as a caption for the photo. The line and syllable count is correct and meets the winter scene requirement.

It sets a positive mood and provides a sense of hope.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings.....Portia

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This winter tanka, A Winter's Wedding, has the proper set up and creates a happy scene where bride and groom display childlike glee as they begin their lives together. Nice.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Isn't that picture radiant? That couple looks glorious! Your poem is filled with fun, too. I enjoyed your intensely worded lines. *smile* Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.....

Comment from wondertwin

Excellent

Very clever idea for the winter themed tanka. I enjoyed the positive, thrilling excitement into your glimpse of winter. I hope you were writing from memory :) :)

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Wondertwin,

Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings......Portia

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

I really like this tanka, it is a brilliant entry into the contest. It has all the syllables correct and met all the requirements. It has wonderful imagery, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Mary

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for your review, rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...Portia

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written an original approach to the contest you have done really well I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Jill

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Jill,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings.....Portia

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A beautiful uplifting Tanka about a union of two hearts in love and the start of a great marriage, the artwork is perfect to match your heartfelt and positive poem, gorgeous, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Dolly,

Thank you for your review, rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....Portia

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

There is nothing better than love when it is new and fresh, with the exception of love, when it has stood the test of time and still endures.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Tom,

Thank you for your review and very true comments. Blessings....Portia

Comment from suep

Excellent

Your poem meets the syllable requirements and paints a lovely, playful winter scene. I especially enjoyed 'Romantic run in the snow'. Perfect picture choice and presentation. A fun, enjoyable read. Best wishes in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings....Portia