Reverie in Door County
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Comment from Thomas Bowling
A good contest entry. You should do well.
Was a time of wistful, teenage dreams
Awakened tonight by tender moonbeams
Like this stanza.
You meet the criteria. Good luck in the contest. I don't do well in them.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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A good contest entry. You should do well.
Was a time of wistful, teenage dreams
Awakened tonight by tender moonbeams
Like this stanza.
You meet the criteria. Good luck in the contest. I don't do well in them.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your read and comments.
Comment from Kingsland
This poem has very good rhyming and it flows along those rhymes effortlessly. This was a look back though time. It was well-written without any errors that I could find. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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This poem has very good rhyming and it flows along those rhymes effortlessly. This was a look back though time. It was well-written without any errors that I could find. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Tlhanks for the read and the comments.
