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Comment from
nordicgirl
I have seen you do this yoy jackass. Hahaheeeehehe. Tes, it is fun rxcept for the people you beat. You give people complexes. But, hey, there fault for listening to your BS!!!! NG
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
Comment from
Rasmine
Hi again, Mikey.
Good play. Love your ending!
I found a couple of typos: At the beginning, when you describe your characters you used ; instead of : Larry; He ain't lyin' (this was the end of the sentence, but there is no period.
Okay. TC
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
Comment from
emptypage
Great story!
I suspected the long shot from the half as soon as you mentioned it. Don't know why.
I also recognized the Ali-esque boasting.
Great tribute to Marky and Ali.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
Comment from
brenda bickers
Hi Mikey,
I like your tribute to the greatest boxer ever. Your script is very real and is just the kind of banter that goes on between sport rivals. When I began to read this I had no idea who would come out on top, so you definitely had the suspense element there.
I could by your description imagine the scene as the story unfolded. Well done, I enjoyed that.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
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