Environment
Acrostic Poem6 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This one is for a blind writing contest. When you enter a blind contest, no one gets notification even after it is over. That is why I don't enter them anymore. This is excellently done as an acrostic
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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This one is for a blind writing contest. When you enter a blind contest, no one gets notification even after it is over. That is why I don't enter them anymore. This is excellently done as an acrostic
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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I actually got tied for second place !!!!
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I believe it. it is quite good
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I'll keep trying
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I'll keep trying
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Great points in saving our environment. On the news - three people went
inside of a manhole. They did not go down with air mask and oxygen.
The poisons of the sewer killed three men. The fourth went down with
oxygen and pulled out the three. He is in the hospital... prayers...look it up.
Yes, people throw away and not reuse. There is a lot of food that could be
used to feed animals. The poor need handouts and could use their time
cleaning up, helping in the community, in exchange.
We need to have wisdom - smart poem. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Great points in saving our environment. On the news - three people went
inside of a manhole. They did not go down with air mask and oxygen.
The poisons of the sewer killed three men. The fourth went down with
oxygen and pulled out the three. He is in the hospital... prayers...look it up.
Yes, people throw away and not reuse. There is a lot of food that could be
used to feed animals. The poor need handouts and could use their time
cleaning up, helping in the community, in exchange.
We need to have wisdom - smart poem. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for your detailed commentary, review, and stars.
Yes, I did read the article you referred to. It's disgusting state of affairs. Pollution is going to be the demise if war doesn't end us first.
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, ENVIRONMENT, acts as a flare for help in what everyone except the corporations with money to lose can see is the beginning of the end for the world to which we've become familiar.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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This acrostic poem, ENVIRONMENT, acts as a flare for help in what everyone except the corporations with money to lose can see is the beginning of the end for the world to which we've become familiar.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Maybe Trump will act !!!!! Thank you for rating and reviewing my poem. Big money is spent while finger pointing, committees established, meetings to elect more committees and denial of evidence continues..
Comment from Drew Delaney
Yea, this is so true. I just hope it's not too late for our grandchildren's sake. You did nicely with this acrostic form. Best wishes in the Name contest. Drew
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Yea, this is so true. I just hope it's not too late for our grandchildren's sake. You did nicely with this acrostic form. Best wishes in the Name contest. Drew
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much ! I appreciated your review ( there are So many penners to review) I hope man sees reality soon instead of wasting money on committees ,which want meetings ,which want more committees...which want... LOL....
Comment from Kingsland
You have that right, it's time for action. Not just big words will do. We need to roll up our sleeves and get to work. This poem has a message line that is needed for everyone on this planet we live on. This was an excellent piece of poetic art to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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You have that right, it's time for action. Not just big words will do. We need to roll up our sleeves and get to work. This poem has a message line that is needed for everyone on this planet we live on. This was an excellent piece of poetic art to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for reviewing and the good rating. I certainly hope 'man' realizes the devastation, but it's always pointing fingers, debating evidence, or spending money just to get commities to set up meetings etc.
If you are in Stafford UK, you must be a Serf to be living on Kings land. LOL (sorry)
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I live in Stafford New York USA...
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Oops ! Culpa Mia.
Thanks for your compliment. I read somewhere a while ago that cancer in the NE has a higher rate than average.The winds blow from west to east - thus carrying pollution from industrial mid west.
Comment from sweetthanesue
telling it like it is and though all this is true ,,,never too late too start the clean up....."Time for immediate action" for the sake of our next generation...
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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telling it like it is and though all this is true ,,,never too late too start the clean up....."Time for immediate action" for the sake of our next generation...
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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I appreciated your review and awarding 5 stars for the poem . Mankind is destroying the planet quickly. For all the talk , finger pointing is slowing rescue down. I agree, and I am scared for the next generations plight. Thanks again