Infant
Diamante contest6 total reviews
Comment from fimarie78
This is a well designed diamante with a descriptive transition from newborn to adult. The adjectives were well chosen. I particularly liked angelic and mature. Best of luck in the contest. Fiona
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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This is a well designed diamante with a descriptive transition from newborn to adult. The adjectives were well chosen. I particularly liked angelic and mature. Best of luck in the contest. Fiona
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Thank ypu
Comment from Bill Schott
This diamante poem, Infant, has the correct setup and takes us through the maturity progress of the typical infant, well-nourished and properly nurtured, through the life cycle bringing him/her to the age of majority. Nice.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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This diamante poem, Infant, has the correct setup and takes us through the maturity progress of the typical infant, well-nourished and properly nurtured, through the life cycle bringing him/her to the age of majority. Nice.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a great, short ride through time from infant to adult in sixteen words! Genius, a perfect poem to tickle the senses, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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What a great, short ride through time from infant to adult in sixteen words! Genius, a perfect poem to tickle the senses, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you
Comment from rspoet
You've written a fine Diamante poem for the contest
with good choice of subject and descriptors
The wish of every parent that their child
grows into a healthy responsible adult
Good use of the antonym version
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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You've written a fine Diamante poem for the contest
with good choice of subject and descriptors
The wish of every parent that their child
grows into a healthy responsible adult
Good use of the antonym version
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Hayley Solomon
Hello, I have just completed one of these a few hours ago! Yours is perfect. Lovely articulation, good transition from synonym to antonym, all elements present, well done!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Hello, I have just completed one of these a few hours ago! Yours is perfect. Lovely articulation, good transition from synonym to antonym, all elements present, well done!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you
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Pleasure!
Comment from keimosobie
not a lot to write about in this one.
seems like you met the criteria of the poem.
the picture and the poem mesh well together.
the word choice is good since you are so limited.
well done. good luck
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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not a lot to write about in this one.
seems like you met the criteria of the poem.
the picture and the poem mesh well together.
the word choice is good since you are so limited.
well done. good luck
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you
