A Patchwork
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Comment from judester
This is a great entry and so apt. Aren't family members so different? (I know my four sisters and I cannot be more different) Yet, we all stitch together into a beautiful quilt of family. Good luck, see you at the finish line, cheers, j
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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This is a great entry and so apt. Aren't family members so different? (I know my four sisters and I cannot be more different) Yet, we all stitch together into a beautiful quilt of family. Good luck, see you at the finish line, cheers, j
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Thank you !
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Cheers, judester
Comment from angel123
Wow! There's a lot of good poems in this contest. Yours is one of my favorites. I like your subject and your message about family is defined in an unique way.
angel123
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Wow! There's a lot of good poems in this contest. Yours is one of my favorites. I like your subject and your message about family is defined in an unique way.
angel123
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Leineco
What wonderful metaphorical imagery you have
used here! Especially in terms of the iconic style
of homemade quilts. . .bits and pieces of seemingly
unrelated material woven together by sentimental
attachment and producing memories tapestry.
so much said in a mere 11 syllables :-)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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What wonderful metaphorical imagery you have
used here! Especially in terms of the iconic style
of homemade quilts. . .bits and pieces of seemingly
unrelated material woven together by sentimental
attachment and producing memories tapestry.
so much said in a mere 11 syllables :-)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your insightful review!
Comment from jyshaffer
this was so quaint and comforting. I enjoyed the unexpected topic -- thought I was going to read about sewing but it was about family. The use of unusual punctuation made it visibly quirky, which lent to the feeling of the poem too. Nice job in such a concise poem.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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this was so quaint and comforting. I enjoyed the unexpected topic -- thought I was going to read about sewing but it was about family. The use of unusual punctuation made it visibly quirky, which lent to the feeling of the poem too. Nice job in such a concise poem.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Donya Quijote
That is undoubtedly the definition of family, especially when extended family and pets (can't forget them) are included. Good luck in the contest....
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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That is undoubtedly the definition of family, especially when extended family and pets (can't forget them) are included. Good luck in the contest....
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from rspoet
This is an interesting entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 3-5-3
A family is a union, just like a patchwork quilt
odds and ends sewn together to make a whole
Excellent picture to go with poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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This is an interesting entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 3-5-3
A family is a union, just like a patchwork quilt
odds and ends sewn together to make a whole
Excellent picture to go with poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
