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Why don't they stay on the ground like everyone else?
5 total reviews
Comment from
Bill Schott
The 5-7-5 poem about birds, Unpopular in the City, strikes a chord of truth as I've heard that pigeons are rats with wings. God love 'em.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
Comment from
Linda Kay
Great picture to help illustrate the "bombing birds." Your syllable count is correct and you definitely addressed the prompt. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
Comment from
BeasPeas
Oh, I am just rolling on the floor at this amusing and cute 5-7-5. Great job with wording, rhyming and image. I think you may have a winner here. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
Comment from
Poetic Candice
This was a really funny piece. The last line mad me laugh, I had to read it twice. For the type of short poem it was I think that you did a good job especially with the touch of wit at the end. Nicely done.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
Comment from
Marykelly
A flock of pigeons can be pretty messy especially on car windshields. They are also with us no matter what the season since they don't migrate so not only are they messy, they never take their mess someplace else.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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