Real Fake !
Poem Acrostic5 total reviews
Comment from Sixty70
Good job with this. Nice meter and rhyme, plus the acrostic. My favorite line was "K". I looked up kleptocracy to see what folks were saying online. Oh my! Inside trading, conflicts of interest, corruption, all things in the news today. Love the internal rhyme with democracy. Good job expressing your feelings about this!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Good job with this. Nice meter and rhyme, plus the acrostic. My favorite line was "K". I looked up kleptocracy to see what folks were saying online. Oh my! Inside trading, conflicts of interest, corruption, all things in the news today. Love the internal rhyme with democracy. Good job expressing your feelings about this!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Superb review -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from jyshaffer
I like how you conveyed so much opinion in such a short amount of space. Your commentary is a cold acknowledgement of what our near future holds and you communicated it so clearly and succinctly. I also like how the name of the poem was a bit mysterious and I had no idea what the topic would be until I clicked on it and saw the actual poem. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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I like how you conveyed so much opinion in such a short amount of space. Your commentary is a cold acknowledgement of what our near future holds and you communicated it so clearly and succinctly. I also like how the name of the poem was a bit mysterious and I had no idea what the topic would be until I clicked on it and saw the actual poem. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Such an engaging review and 6 twinkling stars - thanks for the accolade zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, FAKE, is a short and sweet introduction to what will be four years of lying, back-biting, and being looked down at by smirking elitists who can now do anything at your expense.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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This acrostic poem, FAKE, is a short and sweet introduction to what will be four years of lying, back-biting, and being looked down at by smirking elitists who can now do anything at your expense.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Yes strange times ! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from marinadawn
Nice use of the word fake , that first line really impressed me "Fake is now for real " that is profound As a society we do like to embrace fake till it looks and sounds real It used to be said faking it until you making it which implied to get the thought constructs etc in what you want to achieve until you achieve it now , its faking it is making it, We photo shop even character
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Nice use of the word fake , that first line really impressed me "Fake is now for real " that is profound As a society we do like to embrace fake till it looks and sounds real It used to be said faking it until you making it which implied to get the thought constructs etc in what you want to achieve until you achieve it now , its faking it is making it, We photo shop even character
Comment Written 14-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Great review -thanks for taking time to read zanya
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good acrostic poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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This is a very good acrostic poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya