Beware
Words are not always just words..17 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
This is a great 2.4.2 with a great message that not only do words hurt but can leave scars. good luck on this and have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
This is a great 2.4.2 with a great message that not only do words hurt but can leave scars. good luck on this and have a wonderful day
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much!! Very much appreciated (& a wonderful day to you too!)!!! :)
Comment from Irish Rain
Wow. Very powerful entry in this 2-4-2 contest. True also, words do hurt, and can leave emotional scars, or suicidal scars, a shame. Blessings...
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
Wow. Very powerful entry in this 2-4-2 contest. True also, words do hurt, and can leave emotional scars, or suicidal scars, a shame. Blessings...
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!! Beyond appreciated (from everyone!) as always, but especially with these very limited pieces I've always avoided 'cause
I just didn't think I could pull off saying what I wanted to/making an impact in so little words (& syllables!).. Even though I know that less can often be better, yes!! ;) Thanks again & again!!! :) <3
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
So few words but such an impact made. We all bear scars whether emotional or physical, the marks of the life that has defined us, but marks should not define us, for every day is a chance for a fresh start,emotional and compact piece with exceptional writing, well done, meia :)
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
So few words but such an impact made. We all bear scars whether emotional or physical, the marks of the life that has defined us, but marks should not define us, for every day is a chance for a fresh start,emotional and compact piece with exceptional writing, well done, meia :)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Thank you!! Very much appreciated!!!
Comment from joeruptak
You have said in eight words what some others have tried to say with 100 or more
the world would be a much pleasanter place if everyone
would only think before they speak
very good job
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
You have said in eight words what some others have tried to say with 100 or more
the world would be a much pleasanter place if everyone
would only think before they speak
very good job
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Wow!! Thank you!! I certainly tried, and use to always avoid anything limiting me length wise especially - 'cause I didn't think I could make that impact w/ so little. Thanks again!!!
Comment from crzypnter
Jill,
Your poem strikes to the heart of the saying. Verbal abuse does leave one scared. Words are quick to lift one up or tear one down
August
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
Jill,
Your poem strikes to the heart of the saying. Verbal abuse does leave one scared. Words are quick to lift one up or tear one down
August
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Exactly!! Thanks as always!!! :) <3
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So true, words can penetrate deep and scar us forever and the saying goes that words can't hurt, but they do and your little poem says it all.
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
So true, words can penetrate deep and scar us forever and the saying goes that words can't hurt, but they do and your little poem says it all.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Agreed & thank you so much!! Very much appreciated!!! :)
Comment from fluffnstuff
I really like this...i just told someone the same thing...watch what you say because words can hurt as badly as a knife or bullet to the heart...doing damage. it is just my opinion and we all have one...but i would have used the word AND rather than BUT. Nice one, and i wish you the best. fluff
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
I really like this...i just told someone the same thing...watch what you say because words can hurt as badly as a knife or bullet to the heart...doing damage. it is just my opinion and we all have one...but i would have used the word AND rather than BUT. Nice one, and i wish you the best. fluff
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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Wow!! Thank you SO MUCH!!! I so was not exactly eating that!!! :) <3
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I was reading back through my reviews & for some crazy reason didn't catch (or process maybe out of excitement likely!) the part about using "and" versus "but" - BUT glad I at least caught it in general AND totally see what you're saying too!!! ;) <3