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Comment from Leineco
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ROTFLMAO. . . .that's a heck of a set of antonyms Bill!!

One quintessential oxymoron! President Trump. LOL

Nicely done. . .and no matter what one may think of him,
none can deny "loud & deceptive" stick like glue ;)


 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
    Thank you, Leineco, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting antonym you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work and red, white and blue. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
    Thank you, Teri, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Sixty70
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I get it. Your antonyms are 'presidential' and 'trump'. The formatting is stunning. Love the flag effect! The words 'profiles change from man to man' really describe the office of the president. Hopefully, the antonym won't cause too much damage!

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
    Thank you, Sixty70, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Contrast of the theme is right and truly manifested in words with coherence and tells ironically (or critically, but humorously, confidently and intelligently), I enjoyed the flash of antonym viewpoint.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
    Thank you, ALD, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from emptypage
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Ohhhh.... Nail. On. Head.

I love this.

I have a feeling he's going to provide a lot of fodder for writers in the next wee while.

Good work, and good luck.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thanks, EP, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from frogbook
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Loved the title as much as the poem. I refuse to 'tweet' just because it's such a dumb name-haha. Seems so crazy for a president to be tweeting about the people he works with and all. So unprofessional...downright frightening. So this is a good horror story-ha.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
    Thank you, FB. for giving this a look. NPR was saying today that someone thinks Putin has scandalous data on Trump that keeps him kissing the guys ass even though the rest of the government is calling foul. This is like a movie of which no one would believe the plot. Bill
Comment from nomi338
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Very clever use of terminology to pin the tail on a loud and obnoxious donkey or if you will ASS!. There is a biblical statement that you will know a tree by the fruit it bears, this man/tree bears rotten fruit and inedible nuts.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
    Thank you, nomi, for checking out my antonym. Bill
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Ao, Trump and Presidential are antonyms? I can't help but agree.

Your presentation is a little bit in your face - not unlike the man himself, and you certainly make your point clear with this clever little poem.

Steve

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
    I haven't been this disappointed in America since we decided to sacrafice four thousand American lives to get Dick Cheney's engineering company a billion dollar no bid contract to rebuild Iraq. Republicans are shameless swindlers.
Comment from Drew Delaney
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So true, so true. The Twitter man is about to enter the most serious job in the entire world. Scary business, Hope we are wrong. Drew

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
    He lies to get what he wants and admits it. He fears the press and prefers to hide on Twitter. He is a loose cannon who isn't qualified to be a dog catcher.