A Dirty Deadline
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Comment from C2
Nice one Dragonpoet! For me the criteria on these is if I can honestly say after knowing the rules and the required words if the poen still reads as if these words were all selected by the writer naturally and just happened to fulfill the requirements. This one does that and was amusing to boot!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Nice one Dragonpoet! For me the criteria on these is if I can honestly say after knowing the rules and the required words if the poen still reads as if these words were all selected by the writer naturally and just happened to fulfill the requirements. This one does that and was amusing to boot!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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C2,
Thanks for the encouraging comments. I am glad you thought it sounded naturual. It's always good to make someone laugh
Joan
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Much thought is never fruitful, beneficial or success bringing, we should think of other points or view, as we should not always think of children and about their dirt or dirty job doing every minute, better we should wait and watch and try at last the lesson to teach if required; Well said, well done, post god speed more; b a classic-good (rare) theist writer, post 4 God; may pray FS sick Free Member Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Much thought is never fruitful, beneficial or success bringing, we should think of other points or view, as we should not always think of children and about their dirt or dirty job doing every minute, better we should wait and watch and try at last the lesson to teach if required; Well said, well done, post god speed more; b a classic-good (rare) theist writer, post 4 God; may pray FS sick Free Member Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your comments and high rating, Al.
I am glad you enjoyed my poem
Joan
Comment from C.A.Currie
Dear Dragonpoet, well I'd say you did a bang-up job on the use of all those words. And from the looks of it you even managed to meet that dirty deadline. LOL
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs and Lollipops from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Dear Dragonpoet, well I'd say you did a bang-up job on the use of all those words. And from the looks of it you even managed to meet that dirty deadline. LOL
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs and Lollipops from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Christine. I am glad you liked it. I did. have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment from lyenochka
You did a great job with this challenge to use those specific words. And I love those one word last lines who rhyme: boom, doom, zoom, tomb. I appreciate your message to enjoy life!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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You did a great job with this challenge to use those specific words. And I love those one word last lines who rhyme: boom, doom, zoom, tomb. I appreciate your message to enjoy life!
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. i am glad you liked the rhyme and the message.
Joan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You've done a good job of incorporating all of the required words in this creative piece about time and how we let it control us. We need structure, but sometimes we create too much structure.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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You've done a good job of incorporating all of the required words in this creative piece about time and how we let it control us. We need structure, but sometimes we create too much structure.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thanks for reading and review this, Janet. Too much structure is as bad a too little.
Joan
Comment from royowen
An excellent moral to this poem Joan, I can remember someone once said that we ten to take care of the urgent long before we take care of the important, the urgent is rarely important, beautifully written with a very clever rhyme at the end of each stanza, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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An excellent moral to this poem Joan, I can remember someone once said that we ten to take care of the urgent long before we take care of the important, the urgent is rarely important, beautifully written with a very clever rhyme at the end of each stanza, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Hi Roy,
Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. Glad you liked it.
I like the quote.
Joan
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Most welcome
Comment from Iza Deleanu
You are so right we are always chasing the deadline and we lose focus on what really matters, like live a little. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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You are so right we are always chasing the deadline and we lose focus on what really matters, like live a little. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review this poem, Iza. I appreciate it.
Joan
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem with the use of the words. This made for a very good and interesting poem. Very wise words too. Blessings,Teri
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This is a very well written poem with the use of the words. This made for a very good and interesting poem. Very wise words too. Blessings,Teri
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging words, Teri. I appreciate all the stars.
Joan
Comment from MLEaton
A really well constructed and thought out poem, taking into account all those words in the prompt. And you made it fun, too ... Well done!
One very small spelling mistake
'That (t)his is a shallow ... t needed.
Thank you for a great start to Sunday morning
Marion :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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A really well constructed and thought out poem, taking into account all those words in the prompt. And you made it fun, too ... Well done!
One very small spelling mistake
'That (t)his is a shallow ... t needed.
Thank you for a great start to Sunday morning
Marion :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thanks for taking time on your Sunday to review my poem. I am glad you got some fun out of it.
Joan
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very good use of all those words! Poem was entertaining and flowed well and has a great message. I am not sure, but do you think...look on (instead of at) life...would join the line to the previous two? Unless you want it to fit in with both upper and lower lines...(poetry. So confused.lol)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Very good use of all those words! Poem was entertaining and flowed well and has a great message. I am not sure, but do you think...look on (instead of at) life...would join the line to the previous two? Unless you want it to fit in with both upper and lower lines...(poetry. So confused.lol)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the tjoughful review. It is much appreciated.
dp
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You're welcome
