Jealousy (Acrostic)
Contest Entry17 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
very good on the acrostic with jealousy, even has some good rhyme which helps with the rhythm and flow, should do well, good luck and have a great day
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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very good on the acrostic with jealousy, even has some good rhyme which helps with the rhythm and flow, should do well, good luck and have a great day
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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William,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....
Comment from Heidi M
Your acrostic poem flows well. You did a nice job having it make sense, as opposed to just a jumble of words. I like you last line because it leaves room for the hope of being able to show love.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Your acrostic poem flows well. You did a nice job having it make sense, as opposed to just a jumble of words. I like you last line because it leaves room for the hope of being able to show love.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Heidi,
Thank you for your review, rating, and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.......
Comment from Thal1959
Very nicely done. Generally speaking, it is not beneficial in an acrostic to use the "title" word three time within the piece. But since this prompt is "One word: Jealousy," I feel the repeated use of the key word is beneficial.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Very nicely done. Generally speaking, it is not beneficial in an acrostic to use the "title" word three time within the piece. But since this prompt is "One word: Jealousy," I feel the repeated use of the key word is beneficial.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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I must say you are correct about me using the word three times, and my thinking was the same as yours. I just couldn't around using it in penning this acrostic. Thank you for your kind and honest review. Blessings my friend........
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You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good job you have done on the acrostic poem jealousy. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I liked all the colors you used on this. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very good job you have done on the acrostic poem jealousy. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I liked all the colors you used on this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings......
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh, you are so right about jealousy. It does cause envy and distrust, and it does get out of control. One just lets their imaginations get away from them the more they sit and think about the ills caused by the other person. Best to do what you said, and let love be expressed. It's really the only thing that can heal all wounds.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Oh, you are so right about jealousy. It does cause envy and distrust, and it does get out of control. One just lets their imaginations get away from them the more they sit and think about the ills caused by the other person. Best to do what you said, and let love be expressed. It's really the only thing that can heal all wounds.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
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Rhonda,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings........
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I like the format you used to write the poem in. The background and color words completed it well. I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well.
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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A well-written contest entry. I like the format you used to write the poem in. The background and color words completed it well. I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
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Winnona,
Thank you for your review and kind comments.......
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
It was interesting to read your well written, to-the-point acrostic/jealousy poem. You made a lot of really good observations about this vice so many are subject to. Great job. Warm regards, Aggie
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It was interesting to read your well written, to-the-point acrostic/jealousy poem. You made a lot of really good observations about this vice so many are subject to. Great job. Warm regards, Aggie
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Aggie,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings........
