Jealousy (Acrostic)
Contest Entry17 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Jealousy is a HUGE waste of emotion, as there will always be those greater, prettier, younger, richer, more talented....than ourselves. Competition with others is great...causes us to strive, but rejoice in the win, even if it's not ours. Then it will be. Lovely entry, and you've put it in the acrostic form, great!!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Jealousy is a HUGE waste of emotion, as there will always be those greater, prettier, younger, richer, more talented....than ourselves. Competition with others is great...causes us to strive, but rejoice in the win, even if it's not ours. Then it will be. Lovely entry, and you've put it in the acrostic form, great!!! Blessings...
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend for your review and very wise comments. Blessings.............
Comment from palaceofmind
This took a great amount of skill and it definitely shows! The adjectives you choose create the perfect atmosphere for your poem. The line 'Such a waste of emotions...suspicion relates' sums up the moral of your poem perfectly. I like how you left the reader with a bit of hope at the end. Nice job!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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This took a great amount of skill and it definitely shows! The adjectives you choose create the perfect atmosphere for your poem. The line 'Such a waste of emotions...suspicion relates' sums up the moral of your poem perfectly. I like how you left the reader with a bit of hope at the end. Nice job!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
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Thanks so much my friend for such an outstanding review. Your review, rating and comments are greatly appreciated. Blessings......
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent poem. Jealousy is not an expression of love. It's an expression of selfishness. It's not love the jealous desire desired, but attention.
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An excellent poem. Jealousy is not an expression of love. It's an expression of selfishness. It's not love the jealous desire desired, but attention.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments. Blessings........
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is a very well written acrostic poem jealousy is a terrible thing to possess and lead to so many other problem that stem from it good luck in the contest regards Jill
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Yes this is a very well written acrostic poem jealousy is a terrible thing to possess and lead to so many other problem that stem from it good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings.........
Comment from Ella25
Beautiful my friend. It is what I need to read to feel little better. Thank you for your wise and kind words. Jealousy is a poison; that eats our mind slowly. Well-done. All the best with the contest. Blessings, Ella
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Beautiful my friend. It is what I need to read to feel little better. Thank you for your wise and kind words. Jealousy is a poison; that eats our mind slowly. Well-done. All the best with the contest. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
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Ella,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments. I am glad this poem made you feel better. May God continue to watch over you and keep you in His loving care. Blessings....................
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You are welcome, my friend. Your wise words helped me. Bless your heart. Ella
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
You make some great points about the troubles jealousy brings into our lives. And, as far as I could see, yours is the only acrostic in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
You make some great points about the troubles jealousy brings into our lives. And, as far as I could see, yours is the only acrostic in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings...............
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Very good poem on the subject of Envy/Jealousy-are they the same? Creating such torment in a persons life, if one can let go on jealousy and spite so much more joy is gleaned from life. well written piece. kind regards Meia.
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Very good poem on the subject of Envy/Jealousy-are they the same? Creating such torment in a persons life, if one can let go on jealousy and spite so much more joy is gleaned from life. well written piece. kind regards Meia.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
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Yes, jealousy and envy are basically the same. Thank you for your review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...............
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a very well executed entry. While I usually don't care much for the Acrostic form - you have managed to use it to benefit here as the lines are powerful and graceful in poetic construction. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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This is a very well executed entry. While I usually don't care much for the Acrostic form - you have managed to use it to benefit here as the lines are powerful and graceful in poetic construction. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
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You are very kind, thank you for taking the time to give this a review. Your review, rating and very kind comments are greatly appreciated. Blessings...............
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My pleasure. Good luck.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A good acrostic on the word Jealousy. You have raised relevant points in your lines especially 'Uses others to create chaos...stir one's soul'. Very good observational point here. Well written and Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
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A good acrostic on the word Jealousy. You have raised relevant points in your lines especially 'Uses others to create chaos...stir one's soul'. Very good observational point here. Well written and Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review, rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.....
Comment from loismddavis
A nice Acrostic poem (good illustration and color) where you tell the reader some of the things that jealousy creates. good job
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A nice Acrostic poem (good illustration and color) where you tell the reader some of the things that jealousy creates. good job
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review, rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....
