ff von clownstik
a tyburn poem5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This tyburn, FF Von Clownstik, follows the format and echoes the feelings of half of America and makes us all wonder what the rest of the world thinks about us.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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This tyburn, FF Von Clownstik, follows the format and echoes the feelings of half of America and makes us all wonder what the rest of the world thinks about us.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Man, you got some serious goings- on in America. I just cannot see Trump lasting 4 years. He is like a train wreck. When Jon Stewart called him this name, he freaked and started a twitter war. Just not presidential material. I am Canadian, but I sympathize.Thanks for the review Bill. Cheers, j
Comment from angel123
Your poem is well written and I enjoyed reading it. I like your artwork choice and your poem flows and rhymes well
angel123
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Your poem is well written and I enjoyed reading it. I like your artwork choice and your poem flows and rhymes well
angel123
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars. Jon Stewart called Trump this name and he got so upset and began a twiiter war like a 10 year old. How is he going to lead America when something so dumb sets him off? sigh...Cheers, j
Comment from lyenochka
Fun poem! I like how the sound of the rhyming participles create the sound of someone doing somersaults and rolling. I am not sure from your notes if you had some hidden political meaning. Of course, I could guess. I don't think he's capable of a balancing act.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Fun poem! I like how the sound of the rhyming participles create the sound of someone doing somersaults and rolling. I am not sure from your notes if you had some hidden political meaning. Of course, I could guess. I don't think he's capable of a balancing act.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Haha, Jon Stewart called Trump this name, then they had a twitter war of name calling. So easy to ruffle his feathers. Thanks for the review, cheers, j
Comment from rama devi
Superb! I love how this sounds like what it describes. Tight and polished. Well conceived adn finely presented. A strong entry. This poem does not really need the end-line punctuation (in my opinion). Optional suggestion to delete it.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Superb! I love how this sounds like what it describes. Tight and polished. Well conceived adn finely presented. A strong entry. This poem does not really need the end-line punctuation (in my opinion). Optional suggestion to delete it.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the review and advice...done. A comedian called trump ff von clownstik. I thought that was pretty funny. Cheers, j
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It's hilarious!~ :-))
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tyburn. The rules of the Tyburn is followed correctly. It reads well with a little ring with it to make the reader smile. The font color is very hard to read on the background. I suggest a darker background or a darker font.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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A very well-written Tyburn. The rules of the Tyburn is followed correctly. It reads well with a little ring with it to make the reader smile. The font color is very hard to read on the background. I suggest a darker background or a darker font.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the review and advice, I changed the font color. There is a comedian in America called Jon Stewart and he calls Trump FF Von Clownstik. Trump got soooo upset like a little girl, sigh, that;.'s where this poem comes from, Cheers, j
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The font reads much better now. Some people cannot see the humor when they are the victim.
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Thanks for that, Trump must stop tweeting like a teenager, very unprofessional. Cheers, j
