Dear Lord, Let Me Be The Worst!
Bad Rhyming Contest5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This is not an example, it is the example. Not really; there are a couple dozen examples in my portfolio and I wasn't even trying. Nice job with this. Now try bat spilling.
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This is not an example, it is the example. Not really; there are a couple dozen examples in my portfolio and I wasn't even trying. Nice job with this. Now try bat spilling.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
Comment from valmay
The poem itself was truly awful Don. Well done. I shall have to see if I can still.vote
Just a check in from Africa. You were right about Nature picking the ugly. I broke my nose last week.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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The poem itself was truly awful Don. Well done. I shall have to see if I can still.vote
Just a check in from Africa. You were right about Nature picking the ugly. I broke my nose last week.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Welcome home, Valmay! I'm sorry about your nose! I don't recall maligning The Ugly, which would be out of character for me, because I'm quite pro ugly. (To prove it, I'll have you know, some of my best friends are ugly - and, anticipating your skepticism, they're not just token Uglies.)
Thank you for your kind crushing insult! And your generous sixer!!
Don
Comment from robina1978
Nice picture that complements your poem perfectly. I can relate to your introduction in the poem. I've never seen a prompt like this before. So I did not enter. Your rhyming part seems to rhyme. Best wishes for the prompt.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Nice picture that complements your poem perfectly. I can relate to your introduction in the poem. I've never seen a prompt like this before. So I did not enter. Your rhyming part seems to rhyme. Best wishes for the prompt.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating, Robina!
Comment from tfawcus
There's a substantial difference between a rhymster and a poet, as your poem amply demonstrates. Poems that wander here and there in search for a rhyme can be quite diabolical - though in the hands of an expert, they can also be hilarious. Noel Coward comes to mind!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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There's a substantial difference between a rhymster and a poet, as your poem amply demonstrates. Poems that wander here and there in search for a rhyme can be quite diabolical - though in the hands of an expert, they can also be hilarious. Noel Coward comes to mind!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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That's true, what you said about the rhymster and the poet, Tony. I hope you still believe I'm the latter. Thanks for your comments!
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Definitely still among that glorious band of poets who have, through the ages, signed themselves "Anon"! LOL
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Have to be Anon for these "blind" posts. :o)
Comment from marinadawn
I actually read this whole poem and liked it , it made me smile for it carries truth rhyme must not just rhyme for the sake of rhyme but make sense , now trying to express that thought makes me feel like Alice in wonderland so round about think will stop here
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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I actually read this whole poem and liked it , it made me smile for it carries truth rhyme must not just rhyme for the sake of rhyme but make sense , now trying to express that thought makes me feel like Alice in wonderland so round about think will stop here
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thanks a lot for reading it entirely, and liking and understanding it, which you did, although it made you dizzy, for which I apologize.
