Comment from fimarie78

Excellent

A beautiful palindrome capturing the essence of a magical childhood.

I am glad you have returned to fanstory and look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Oh this is a brilliant poem, It appears to me to be a very difficult one to get each line to read forwards and backward and make sense. I wish I had a six for it.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello,
I love your presentation ... it's so festive. I paint folk art so I really enjoy it. It is a wonderful trip of dreams. Good job.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Ooo, I love this poetic form. How fun. I would hate to have to write one, but reading it is really cool. How long did it take to write. I'm be at it for hours.

Great job, my friend,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

Comment from Javed05

Excellent

I like this piece and enjoyed reading it .it is engaging for the reader.it flows smoothly .language used is great.It creates good imagery.thanks for sharing with us

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a wonderful fantasy poem, it captures all my favorite creatures, fairies, unicorns, and sprites. Your poetic form is smooth and you did well with this form of poetry, not an easy feat. I am bookcasing this poem so I can read it again.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

Comment from kriver

Excellent

Hi Jeni,
I enjoyed reading your palindrome poem.
I have written a couple of them. I found them to be quite a challenge as well as satisfying and fun to write.
Best regards,
K River

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Wow!
I love the artwork that you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
The back ground colors are so bright and cheerful
You captured my attention from the start
Thank you for sharing this amazing poem.
Cookie

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

First...the color scheme with photo is fantastic...
The lines of the free verse are like snippets of dreams ...
in dreamland...
a magical trip through a
child's world...

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

That must have been tough to do. You make it easy to picture the children asleep in their beds dreaming of fantastic creatures. Love the picture.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017