Happy and Healthy New Year.
An Acrostic, see rules9 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Your Happy and Healthy New Year Acrostic poem is well-written. I enjoyed reading it and I like your artwork choice. I also like your message of wishing all the best happiness and health.
angel123
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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Your Happy and Healthy New Year Acrostic poem is well-written. I enjoyed reading it and I like your artwork choice. I also like your message of wishing all the best happiness and health.
angel123
Comment Written 05-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part f the week.
Comment from Sherman541
Thank you for all the good wishes for everyone, myself included. What a great way to start the New Year to write a New Year's poem. It was very lovely. Thank you again and may you also have a Wonderful and Very Happy New Year with Great Health!! - Sarah
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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Thank you for all the good wishes for everyone, myself included. What a great way to start the New Year to write a New Year's poem. It was very lovely. Thank you again and may you also have a Wonderful and Very Happy New Year with Great Health!! - Sarah
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part f the week.
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you are welcome and thank you - Sarah
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. the words flowed well line to line. The artwork and background color completed the poem well. Your words of good wishes and warning about fireworks were an interesting choice. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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A well-written contest entry. the words flowed well line to line. The artwork and background color completed the poem well. Your words of good wishes and warning about fireworks were an interesting choice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good acrostic poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work you chose went well with your poem. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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This is a very good acrostic poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work you chose went well with your poem. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from kiwisteveh
I'm afraid you lost me with the cryptic ending to your acrostic...
We will catch you?
We know who the culprits are?
I'm sorry, but I don't know and I have absolutely no idea what you are talking about.
Resentfulness might help??
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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I'm afraid you lost me with the cryptic ending to your acrostic...
We will catch you?
We know who the culprits are?
I'm sorry, but I don't know and I have absolutely no idea what you are talking about.
Resentfulness might help??
Steve
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is absolutely great! Your inspirational/motivational acrostic reads so smoothly, the reader can not even tell the poem is an acrostic. Personally, I think a well-written acrostic should not be forced and the ending words of each line should not lag. You avoided both in your poem.
Thank you sharing and a healthy new year to you as well.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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This is absolutely great! Your inspirational/motivational acrostic reads so smoothly, the reader can not even tell the poem is an acrostic. Personally, I think a well-written acrostic should not be forced and the ending words of each line should not lag. You avoided both in your poem.
Thank you sharing and a healthy new year to you as well.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, what a beautiful presentation! I love that photograph, and I love the poem itself, too. There's just one thing - your first word of the title isn't spelled out -
"H-A-P-P-Y"
You want it to read like this:
Hope for
All here to have
Prosperity and
Pleasant memories of the old
Year
See what I mean? And then to be on the safe side, I would do the same thing with the word "and", because it is part of your title too. Like this:
All my wishes are for everyone
No one should be left to
Despair
Your other three words are perfect! (But goodness, you sure made yourself a lot of work, choosing such a long title. *smile*) Happy New Year to you and yours, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Oh, what a beautiful presentation! I love that photograph, and I love the poem itself, too. There's just one thing - your first word of the title isn't spelled out -
"H-A-P-P-Y"
You want it to read like this:
Hope for
All here to have
Prosperity and
Pleasant memories of the old
Year
See what I mean? And then to be on the safe side, I would do the same thing with the word "and", because it is part of your title too. Like this:
All my wishes are for everyone
No one should be left to
Despair
Your other three words are perfect! (But goodness, you sure made yourself a lot of work, choosing such a long title. *smile*) Happy New Year to you and yours, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. And a very happy and healthy New Year. Thanks for the tip.
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of the poem is a reminiscence on good wishes for all in the New Year.
The work highlights the imperative interplay of good and bad in the year and the need for all to anchor with the good while rebuffing the incidence of evil through "resentfulness and punishment.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with specifications of Acrostic Poetry.
Excellent work! Bravo!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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The objective correlative of the poem is a reminiscence on good wishes for all in the New Year.
The work highlights the imperative interplay of good and bad in the year and the need for all to anchor with the good while rebuffing the incidence of evil through "resentfulness and punishment.
The work earns its texture through its strict compliance with specifications of Acrostic Poetry.
Excellent work! Bravo!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. And a very happy and healthy New Year.
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Happy New Year!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the requirements of an Acrostic well. Your choice of framework is quite timely given the start of a New Year being upon us. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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This meets the requirements of an Acrostic well. Your choice of framework is quite timely given the start of a New Year being upon us. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. And a very happy and healthy New Year.
