Free fall...
3/5/3 Senryu on love7 total reviews
Comment from Richard J
Whom with an ounce of poetic appreciation will not love this one, Susan!
I do! ; )
The artist's practiced eye of excellent taste and originality virtually dances off the page into the reader's fertile imagination, and that ain't an easy task in a work of but eight words, but you seem to always eclipse the average.
If this is even half true, you're more blessed than ninety-five percent of us.
I love each and every aspect of this, Susan!
What more to say ... except, hugs to You! ~ Richard
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Whom with an ounce of poetic appreciation will not love this one, Susan!
I do! ; )
The artist's practiced eye of excellent taste and originality virtually dances off the page into the reader's fertile imagination, and that ain't an easy task in a work of but eight words, but you seem to always eclipse the average.
If this is even half true, you're more blessed than ninety-five percent of us.
I love each and every aspect of this, Susan!
What more to say ... except, hugs to You! ~ Richard
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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Don't ya just love that picture???? Sometimes we just have to jump right in huh?and how wonderful when we land on perfection!!! ahhhh Thanks for the great review!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3 senryu, Free Fall, has the correct set up and visits the common problem of rebound danger that sometimes brings one to a happy conclusion rather than misery.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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This 3-5-3 senryu, Free Fall, has the correct set up and visits the common problem of rebound danger that sometimes brings one to a happy conclusion rather than misery.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thanks Bill...and yes a happy conclusion a must!!
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem. It's a wonderful message of love found. Your artwork choice enhances your message and good alliteration of words free fall. Happy Holidays.
angel123
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It's a wonderful message of love found. Your artwork choice enhances your message and good alliteration of words free fall. Happy Holidays.
angel123
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much for this great review!! I do appreciate it! :-)
Comment from DALLAS01
Liked everything about this poem. Beautiful artwork to enhance the poem.
and the little spiral in her hand did not go unnoticed. Nice alliteration. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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Liked everything about this poem. Beautiful artwork to enhance the poem.
and the little spiral in her hand did not go unnoticed. Nice alliteration. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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Thank you so very much!! What a nice review!! I do appreciate.
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:-))
Comment from WalkerMan
As everyone who has ever succeeded at anything knows with certainty, nothing can be achieved without risk of some kind -- and the higher the goal, the greater the risk. There are (often numerous and painful) setbacks along the way, but persistence is the only attitude that pays off. Most failures actually occur just before success, when the pursuant loses patience and gives up too soon. To the extent that this post may be biographical, you are a winner in multiple ways. Finding true love requires taking the greatest risk of all, for, if you are sincere, you are offering your very essence of mind, heart, body, and spirit to someone else in the hope it will be cherished, respected, cared for, and honored in lasting love. May "Soulmate found" be -- and forever remain -- true for you.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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As everyone who has ever succeeded at anything knows with certainty, nothing can be achieved without risk of some kind -- and the higher the goal, the greater the risk. There are (often numerous and painful) setbacks along the way, but persistence is the only attitude that pays off. Most failures actually occur just before success, when the pursuant loses patience and gives up too soon. To the extent that this post may be biographical, you are a winner in multiple ways. Finding true love requires taking the greatest risk of all, for, if you are sincere, you are offering your very essence of mind, heart, body, and spirit to someone else in the hope it will be cherished, respected, cared for, and honored in lasting love. May "Soulmate found" be -- and forever remain -- true for you.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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.....spoil me.You got it Mike...totally. :-)
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You are so welcome, Susan. :)) -- Mike
Comment from tfawcus
I like the way you capture the sense of risk and excitement here, the leap into the unknown and the letting go, that is inherent in finding true love. There is much expressed in these few words of yours.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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I like the way you capture the sense of risk and excitement here, the leap into the unknown and the letting go, that is inherent in finding true love. There is much expressed in these few words of yours.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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oh yes there is!! hehe..thanks tony!! always appreciate you!!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 Senryu poem. We are nit made to be alone. We sometimes need to take a chance, we may find our eternal soul mate.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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A very well-written 3-5-3 Senryu poem. We are nit made to be alone. We sometimes need to take a chance, we may find our eternal soul mate.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thank you dear!