Comment from winnona

Excellent

This is a very well-written contest entry. You describe time perfectly in this poem.Your words flowed line to line combine easily forming the message of the poem for the reader.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for the read. Much appreciated.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem on time. We do not know where time comes from or where it is going. We use time as a tool to schedule our lives.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thanks for the read.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

What an excellent thought-provoking piece.I often think that time is a mere illusion.This poem brings that message to the fore.Clever use of the past-present-now principle.An excellent and interesting piece of work.Much enjoyed.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thank you for the read and your kind words.

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

A great thought provoking poem on time.
One might argue that there is a beginning and an end to time, but one thing is certain.
There is no important time than now.
Ecellent job!
Michael

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thanks for the read and the kind words

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

It is true, as Quantum Physics supports, time is an illusion. NOW is all that matters which you express beautifully in this well penned piece. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thanks for the read and your comments.

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Second review


Good job! I also forgot to mention, I love your artwork choice and color scheme. Well done.



First review (FOUR stars)


I love the theme and substance here, and especially the closing line. I love how you refer to Einstein as Albert! So endearing. I enjoyed this contemplative musing. Just a few spag nits made a few stumbles along the way, so I suggest some edits below:


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Either (that) or time is not for certain


If so(,) what was before the Bang?
When did now become then?


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Does time marches(march) on?

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But,(no ,) can't we dial time back(ward) and forward?

Good lines and rhymes:
There is no yesterday, except in our imagination
There is no tomorrow, it is only our cogitation

I AGREE:
There is no beginning
There is no ending

It is all an illusion
Time is timeless


Perfect ending:


The only time is NOW


If you fix the glaring spag nits (like using marches instead of the correct usage: march and the first suggestion as well), I will upgrade. The others (commas) are optional but recommended.


Warmly,
rd

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for the help. I will make changes as your suggestions.

reply by rama devi on 28-Dec-2016

Great--made a second edit. :-)

reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thank you for the suggestions.

reply by rama devi on 28-Dec-2016

Happy to help

Comment from frogbook

Exceptional

Wow this is a great one for the prompt. Great use of wisdom about time and an excellent ending line that is the final truth. Best of luck in the contest with a very worthy entry.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks much for your read and your rating.