Comment from Realist101

Excellent

Hi Ine! What a fun story. Great for kids and us older ones too! I love your photo, that bone's bigger than the pup! LOL! One idea...I think 'Jee' should be spelled 'Gee'? Other than that, spot on! Love it! Susan

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a Happy New year.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Poor Chase simply can't find a solution to his obsession--the bone. He tries not to think about it, but can't and is forced to hide it. His hiding spot is unfortunate... oh well, poor guy.

Cute story that I'm sure kids will love.
Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a Happy New year.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Clever ending. I like the picture of the dog with the extra large bone. The dog is using good doggie sense about not trusting the bone to be safe if he isn't around to guard it, and he has other things to do. Great ending. Chase may be in trouble. It seems that in a few places you've omitted words. Examples: "racing the garden" I think you mean "racing to the garden." "As lightning," do you mean "As fast as lightning"? Great story. judi

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a Happy New year.

reply by judiverse on 30-Dec-2016

Best wishes for the New Year. judi

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Ha, ha. The little doggies (I have one) seem to think they are the biggest ones. Image to accompany your short write is amusing and works perfectly with your words. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have very happy New Year.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A lovely story about chase the dog, stressing about finding a place to bury his hard won, delicious bone, finally he does, but it it turns out that dad had created a hole to foundation a pole, and dear old Chase has used it to bury his bone, whoops! Well done, Ine. Great little story, blessings, Roy
Typo : The best bone (he) has ever gotten, 2: but several place(s) won't be allowed by mum, 3:,finally Chas(e)

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have very happy New Year.

reply by royowen on 29-Dec-2016

Welcome Ine

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

That it a cute photo of Chas and the bone is bigger then him
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
I had to laugh when he buried his bone in the wrong place.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Now up to a very Happy New Year.

reply by misscookie on 29-Dec-2016

You're very welcome,Happy New Years Back to you. take care.
cookie

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

"This without any doubt the best bone he('s), or has ever gotten." ... Just a few minor edits are needed here to make the sentence grammatically correct, Ine...

He has to hide the bone as quickly as possible, before an other another dog finds it. ... "another," just one word, Ine ...

He puts it in there drops the bony morsel into the hole and then vigorously scratches earth over it. ... This harkens to the old "Show, don't tell" theory of prose writing, Ine. A few descriptive adjectives added can help immerse your readers into the narrative, regardless of its brevity...

Cute little tail, though. Heh-heh, I meant tale, of course...
~Dean ;)

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Now up to a very Happy New Year.

reply by Dean Kuch on 28-Dec-2016

You're very welcome, Ine.
Happy New Year.
~Dean :)

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written I liked the story and I think children will love it is just the right length and made me smile well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Now up to a very Happy New Year.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Finally Chas (Chase) can go playing in the garden. Digging to bury a bone is a natural for dogs. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Blame the cat.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Now up to a very Happy New Year.

Comment from CEO2020

Excellent

This is a good bedtime story. I love the picture. The story is cute. I can see the life of Chase. I can feel his thoughts and you describe.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Now up to a very Happy New Year.