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Love of Animals

Viewing comments for Chapter 18 " Black swan"
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Comment from SamWrites4you
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I really like how this poem is informative, very clever! This piece is also thought provoking as now I am interested in looking into other types of swans out there. I just wish it rhymed a bit more. Nonetheless, it still flowed together nicely. Great job here!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
    Thanks for your review and comments
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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You are taking us to an interest in animals, I hope you are making this into an ABC book of pieces for us to enjoy. Very nicely done .

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
    Whoa Barb What a great and complimentary suggestion. Thank you so much
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
    Whoa Barb What a great and complimentary suggestion. Thank you so much