Seashore and Sunset
Sunset on the beach is a calm transition from day to night.14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 about nature, Seashore and Sunset, reminds us that the world is huge and fully capable of providing all we need. This includes a sedative to make the soul restful. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2016
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This 5-7-5 about nature, Seashore and Sunset, reminds us that the world is huge and fully capable of providing all we need. This includes a sedative to make the soul restful. Nice poem.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2016
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Thal1959
Very nicely composed with gentle theme pairing sunset with lullabies and night. Speaks of nature's connection between the seas, the sun, the night, and the natural need to sleep. Very well done.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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Very nicely composed with gentle theme pairing sunset with lullabies and night. Speaks of nature's connection between the seas, the sun, the night, and the natural need to sleep. Very well done.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from winnona
a well-written contest entry, Your well-chosen words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader, well done.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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a well-written contest entry, Your well-chosen words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader, well done.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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ThAnk you
Comment from rama devi
Good pun on sandman. Good word economy. Good alliteration and consonance of S. Good imagery. Good flow, though I would have liked it better if the first two lines were linked, like haiku. True to form 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest.
Good job!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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Good pun on sandman. Good word economy. Good alliteration and consonance of S. Good imagery. Good flow, though I would have liked it better if the first two lines were linked, like haiku. True to form 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest.
Good job!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 21-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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Thank you
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:-))
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
I am with your, I love tranquility of the beach at sunset. I love the way it calms me down and grounds me to earth. All my troubles seem to disappear. Well done, you did an awesome job.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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Hello,
I am with your, I love tranquility of the beach at sunset. I love the way it calms me down and grounds me to earth. All my troubles seem to disappear. Well done, you did an awesome job.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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Thank you
Comment from Dean Kuch
I agree, Mystery Poet
There are few places on earth where we as human beings feel less significant in the grand scheme of things than when we are standing on a beach looking out over the horizon at the vastness of the sea.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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I agree, Mystery Poet
There are few places on earth where we as human beings feel less significant in the grand scheme of things than when we are standing on a beach looking out over the horizon at the vastness of the sea.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 21-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016
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ThAnk you
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My pleasure, Mary.
~Dean
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written nature 5-7-5 poem. Yes, it seems the sunset at the Beach front always have a special magic unexplainable.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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A very well-written nature 5-7-5 poem. Yes, it seems the sunset at the Beach front always have a special magic unexplainable.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
I love your 5-7-5 nature entry. When I read your
title and description, I had to hope on to read
right away...my favorite subject...(I think)
You did a terrific job on this. Lovely imagery,
nice alliteration in first line and cool, sator-like
last line.
Linda
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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Poet,
I love your 5-7-5 nature entry. When I read your
title and description, I had to hope on to read
right away...my favorite subject...(I think)
You did a terrific job on this. Lovely imagery,
nice alliteration in first line and cool, sator-like
last line.
Linda
Comment Written 20-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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Thank you for such an upbeat review.
Comment from Nika2016
Posted two days ago:
Summer sea encroaches
recedes and returns
love's lullaby
too close for comfort
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
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Posted two days ago:
Summer sea encroaches
recedes and returns
love's lullaby
too close for comfort
Comment Written 20-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
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Thank you for understanding the nuances.
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No this was mine! Posted two days ago
Comment from lancellot
All three of these lines paints a perfect picture and different aspect of nature. Each one is somber and as you say displays a sense of tranquility. Good idea to combine them all.
Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
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All three of these lines paints a perfect picture and different aspect of nature. Each one is somber and as you say displays a sense of tranquility. Good idea to combine them all.
Well done.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016
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Thank you for your complimentary remarks.
