Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your well-chosen artwork completed the piece, well done.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for critique zanya

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Zanya,

Ah the pungent smell of the prowling skunk or perhaps a wolverine. Perhaps they might even prowl in a church yard.

Happy Holidays,

Winslow

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

The smell in the air of fireplaces in winter ahs always had an allure. They make the cold air worthwhile. An excellent contest entry. You should do well.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for the critique zanya

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the 5-7-5 contest
with exact syllables
Excellent images in the musky scents and wintry air
and a nice reflective third line
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2016

Thanks for the accolade zanya