Comment from DLBoo

Good

Ricky, I would like to explain why I only gave you four stars for your prologue. I thought the beginning part up to the quote "A heaping helping of house-Pat-Tality." was fabulous. I absolutely loved it. It was after that point that I became a bit confused. I wasn't sure if I was looking at a table of contents or a synopsis. It reads a bit like a synopsis and if that's the case I am intrigued to read more of this work.
I look forward to you clarifying my confusion.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thanks and reaf the next one and you wi,be Enlightened!
Ricky
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I think you did a great job of grabbing the readers interest. This leaves you going -- what just happened - and I can't think of a better way of starting a book.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thanks Michesl and read the nrxt one and you will be...
Enlightened!
Ricky
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Comment from CEO2020

Excellent

Not sure what to make of this. I'm confused. For a nonfiction write, you seem very angry and suicidal. The horror for me is not the story but the author.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Follow and then you will see...
How cruel Life Can be...
Thanks,
Ricky
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Comment from lancellot

Needs Improvement

I'm sorry. This is not personal and not an attack or an insult. I mean no disrespect.

I have refreshed this screen several times to be sure, but there is nothing to this prologue.

I see your notes and a brief description but no actual content.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016

This is coming tomorrow.
Ricky
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