Christ was Born in a Stable
Could have been born in a Palace but...14 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
My wife and I met a woman from the Philippines. I asked if her kids were ready for Santa. She said, "In the Philippines, we don't know about Santa. It's all about Jesus."
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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My wife and I met a woman from the Philippines. I asked if her kids were ready for Santa. She said, "In the Philippines, we don't know about Santa. It's all about Jesus."
Comment Written 19-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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Very wise woman indeed. Thanks so much for your review. Blessings.......
Comment from Albertholden
The thought is profound. You have expressed the Christmas story very well. It's free verse and I feel comfortable with it. It's very abrupt. Some way it might reflect the sacrifice to come might have given the poem even more power.
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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The thought is profound. You have expressed the Christmas story very well. It's free verse and I feel comfortable with it. It's very abrupt. Some way it might reflect the sacrifice to come might have given the poem even more power.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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Thank you for your review, rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...................
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Merry Christmas
Comment from Teri7
This is truly a wonderful job you did on this work. I am also very thankful for the Lord for giving us life and saving our souls! Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Merry Christmas! Teri
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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This is truly a wonderful job you did on this work. I am also very thankful for the Lord for giving us life and saving our souls! Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Merry Christmas! Teri
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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Teri,
Thank you for your review, rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings and Have a Merry Christmas...
Comment from Dustin Etting
I am fairly new to the world of poetry; I did not know there was a 10 word poem. I loved yours though. So simple yet such a powerful message! That single night changed the course of all time.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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I am fairly new to the world of poetry; I did not know there was a 10 word poem. I loved yours though. So simple yet such a powerful message! That single night changed the course of all time.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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Dustin,
Welcome to FanStory and thank you for stopping by and giving me a review. Thank you for your review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. I must drop by and give you a review my friend. I joined Fanstory in 2012 and feel the members here are a part of my family. So Welcome, Welcome, Welcome...........Blessings.........
