Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. Your words combining easily formed the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thank you for the read.

Comment from angel123

Excellent

You penned a nice, meaningful nature poem. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Happy Holidays!

angel 123

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thank you for the read. Happy Holidays to you also.

Comment from Franklin Price

Excellent

You have recognized water, the real essence of life, in a wonderful and creative way. The poem is further inhanced by the great picture you have chosen for it. Great!

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016

Thank you for the read and the comment.

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

It seems odd to think about it that way, but it's true. We'd be in trouble without the rain. Your ten words sum it up perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016

Thank for the read and your comment.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the contest with the required ten words
An excellent insight, those who have experienced drought
know water's importance very well
Strong concrete imagery
and the perfect picture to match
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for the read and the comments.